soft and gentle write Bernice
Peace & love be with you

William

Such a heart rendering piece. I pray peace and comfort for your dear father as he finishes this brief stage of existance and walks into the brilliance of another much more wonderful one. Deborah

Very sweet and tender.

ann

May Your Heart Know Peace &
May Your Tears Embrace You With Renewals Beautiful Bernice
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

To see the ones we love in so much pain is one of the most difficult things that life throws at us...far worst then even there actual departing. I hope your father finds peace soon and that you will always remember how much he loves you.
hugs
fee

My prayers are with you...and your dad. I offer a tear as well.

You'll always be with your father Bernice as your father with you. You will cling to all the beautiful memories you have and live with them every second of everyday. Your dad is in my prayers as to you and your mom. Take care.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Bernice,

May the Love of Our Lord see you both through these rough times. My prayers, God's Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Bernice, you have brought me to tears. Prayers sent to you and your dad.

God bless you for your strength and faith to see you through such a rough time. In my thoughts and prayers you will stay.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Hard time. Awesome write. Liz

Such a hard, hard time, with the bond feeling closer than ever, while angels seem to draw near. My heart goes out to you and your Dad and Mom. God bless and comfort you as you are going through this together.

Love and prayers,
Connie

This is tender and moving and well structured.
John

Bernice, this is a wonderful love poem for your Dad.
I join those who wish you peace. -gene.

(((((Bernice)))))

You write for him, while he is still alive, and carry him to Heaven with tears of grief - powerfully, poignantly penned - well done - you and he are in my prayers -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

That must be so hard! You are in my prayers, (((Sweetie)))! Heartbreaking write; I am sorry you are going through this!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

I don't know how you feel, but I know what you feel. Everything will be alright.
J. Earl Evans

Poignant and touching write... My thoughts and prayers are with you.
Love,
Cryssa

...if a poem could ever be both whimsical and deep, this one's it...

Bernice, what a wonderful write...I hope it brought some peace.

Cheers,
Dan

there's a train leaving here tomorrow, don't get on load up your sorrow, pack on your horrow, tick tock time, gone with the chime, your poetic caring expression verses through here Bernice. hugs:-)

This is filled with so much emotion. I lost my father too, and when he was on the edge, it certainly wasn't easy. God Bless.

Mary

This takes me back to my grandfather . . . A proud man reduced . . . It really should not have to happen like that . . . Beautifully done . . .

Dear Bernice, this is deeply effective making the heart ache and tears flow...You and your father are in my prayers. This brought a flood of memories of when I lost my father, and I know what you're feeling.Bless you!

Love,
ET

One of our poets in the Den just lost her father Sunday suddenly sp I will pray for you and Jill and your family's for your loss.

I cried when I read this. I have a dying mother and i feel the same way
about her. Bernice, this is so very hearfelt, and beautiful.

Harold M. Nash

Oh dear Bernice, this is such a tender poem. I know all about pain, I see so much in my Reiki Energy work, that it is heartbreaking. I don't understand why people have to suffer so much. I don't think you dad will be around too much longer, I felt his energy through your poem, and he is ready to go onto the next life. He needs to know that you are going to be all right, and he will be fine. Pain is a memory, stored, so if too much pain is happening, then the memory of such pain is vivid and it makes it magnified. He is so ready to not be in pain any longer. You must be strong my dear, and do not give up, because his spirit will always be with you no matter what, and that is the blessing of life.
Much peace, love, and light, to you dear one,
Amber "V"