Emasculated (Senryu) (poem) by Bernice Angoh on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 16, 2008

Short in words brilliant in contant
Love & Peace

William

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

yes, speechless and at a loss. superb write. Liz

Reviewed on July 12, 2008

Heartbreaking to me. Need always to say what I am thinking even if compulsive or not. Sometimes I do say the wrong things at the wrong time, so maybe it would be better if I clammed up too and let well enough alone.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

oh the chills down my spine!
Great Little Number Here!!
This Is A Potent Emotional Poem
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

How many times we have been there...and still have those unspoken words?

Georg

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

Heaviness felt in this poem of despair. Perhaps the tide will turn for this person. One can only hope for a brighter day.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on July 9, 2008

Well done!

- Less can sometimes deliver - More!

Bravo!

Reviewed by Quanda Graves

Reviewed on July 9, 2008

Sometimes that's all you can do. I'm sure God heard, listened and performed miracles. I've been there. Great job as usual Bernice!

Until...

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on July 9, 2008

Nice work Bernice...sometimes even the speechless moments weighs upon our soul...

nice work...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

Fabulously done~`*

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

This one I could feel, you know where...;) ed

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

Ah yes! That large troubling world of the spoken and the unspoken.
John

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

This poem says it all :-)A well thought out and a good poem

Edwin

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

Sentiments spoken, sentiments left unsaid, fine writing...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

Bernice, this says so much in such few words. Many times the words won't come out but that doesn't mean they are not being spoken from within. Many times our minds are heavy with worry and our souls are torn & we feel like nothing but an empty shell. A nice write.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

Many of us know where your words are coming from Bernice. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

...well written...weighing...well done...
John

Reviewed by Shedding Light

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

Non-verbal communication is probably the most important form of communication; and this piece of work that you created Bernice, says it all about body language, and non-verbal communication.

Harold M. Nash

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

As we used to say in the turbulent sixties . . . "Heavy, man, heavy!!!" . . .

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

Yes, Bernice, you used the form well to say it all; well,
almost all. -gene.

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

superb! I, too, have felt this way...quite recently, in fact...words that I would like to say, yet am unable because the other person isn't ready to hear them...
sad...

Cryssa

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

I have been there and felt this exact way Bernice...sometimes it is what we cannot or refuse to say that weighs the heavyest on our hearts, souls and minds. Great write and love the graphic.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

This Ru has no equal.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

Feel the ponderousness of this one, Bernice - heavy, like a burden - but so well written - well done -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.