The Lioness (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 13, 2002

Marilyn,
This is most excellent! You have painted her in full command of her choices, the artist of her own destiny.
(Thanks much for your clarity re this review.
My sense is you know it was the error was
unintended) With a smile for you, Vicky

Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)

Reviewed on September 12, 2002

Those big cats are so elegant and graceful, so captivating to watch. Your poem reminds me of a documentary I saw recently. It painted the lioness in such a beautiful light, much like the picture you have above.
Great job! :)

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on September 12, 2002

Mighty powerful She is!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on September 11, 2002

It is so good to be reading you again Marilyn, love this one. floria

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on September 10, 2002

This is beautiful...

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on September 9, 2002

Great write Marilyn. I love cats including the big ones like lions.
Amor

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on September 9, 2002

Love this write, Grrl....it's GRrrreat!!!
Jenni

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on September 9, 2002

I love this Marilyn! It sounds like me. hee hee. Love & Light, Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on September 9, 2002

Excellent write, Marilyn!

Reviewed by Tiana

Reviewed on September 9, 2002

In the jungle, the mighty jungle, the lion sleeps tonight! ;) Loved this write, sweets! There is a lioness is us protecting what is ours! (((honihoni)))

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on September 9, 2002

Love it! Of course I am a Leo and agree with this 100% ;)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 9, 2002

love both photo and poem, made for each other...;-)love those wild cats;-)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on September 9, 2002

here, kitty, kitty...niiice kitty kitty...:) love this, excellent! i agree with william...this roars! :) (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Sailor Neptune (Reader)

Reviewed on September 9, 2002

OH that is a big kitty.. I liked your poem.

Reviewed by Karisma Peron (Reader)

Reviewed on September 9, 2002

wild write
good work
KP

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on September 9, 2002

Your message was delivered well and clear
Marilyn! Not as a subliminal meow ... but with a roar! Bill

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on September 9, 2002

this is very good!! marilyn, thought i would let you know that i added my story back onto authorsden, "the 'don't give up' kid". now you can read it again!!