Return (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

Filled with awe loved it !

Reviewed on February 6, 2003

A wonderful, heartfelt piece

Reviewed on February 6, 2003

This is truly excellent Lori. Although I prefer Ambien to Restoril otherwise I wake up at 3am looking for my lover wafting out at sea.

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2003

Wistfully done, Lori.
How did I miss this one?
I can relate to this piece. Sometimes I just seem to find myself
waiting...
-James

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2003

Realism abounds. Great write!!!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on February 4, 2003

A wonderful, heartfelt piece Lori. Excellent.
Chrissie

Reviewed by g g (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2003

Wondering written(: Beautiful

Reviewed by Matthew Spurrill (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

Excelent poem but I just happen to not be retarded like some ppl who rated ur poem cus 10/10 starts to get boaring.

Reviewed by William DeVault

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

Your therapy is a blessing on us all. Excellent work.

Reviewed by Michelle Carroll (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

Very heartfelt and emotional write! Flowed like a brook>

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

Lori you do this so well, even though it's painful..bittersweet, there's always a note of hope ...bravo

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

A hauntingly beautiful verse...you have expressed the sadness with utmost beauty.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

when love journys the depths of the sea, it returns with the desire to harbor...

Reviewed by Vickie Yannuzzi

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

upon reading your review on my poem, came to your web page, and was delighted, to read you poem it is filled with much depth of soul, and a message that seems to haunt me as to a answer. thank you

Reviewed by Samantha Kennedy (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

this flowed so wonderfully...second stanza is beautiful ~ bravo ~

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

Powerfully written--hauntingly beautiful, as well...

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

Love has the power to destroy and yet..it also can overcome and sustain us even in our longest voyages ultimately becoming our salvation. You have transformed and manifested this love into greater works

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

Lori,
What can I say....
Other then your poetry truly speaks to me!!!! You have a gift through your words, of showing the world what it is like from the inside!!!!! Don't ever stop writing!!!!

In Strength and Struggle
Maria
xoxoxoxo

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

So sad, so beautiful, so exquisite.

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

Beautiful poem, Lori. Dreamy and with a touch of realism. I've always liked poets who write beautiful lyric poems, mixed with realism--Giacomo Leopardi, Rub�n Dar�o (his later poems are very powerful), Heinrich Heine. And, of course, e.e. cummings, known for his lyric verse and biting satire.

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

beautifully done....listen to these voices

Reviewed by Dark Stranger (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

vasty edged like neptune's well
enjoyed the image
of lonely with marks

well penned ms

Reviewed by Tomas Ughdair (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

Hi Lori,
Poignant and moving portrayal of loves eternal optimism.
Morchuis

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

This was extremely wonderfully written! Great photo also!