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Erasers On Our Heads!
by Bonnie Lou May → (All Poetry by Bonnie Lou May)
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Erasers On Our Heads!
 
Wouldn’t it be nice if we came with erasers
so we could erase things we’ve done wrong?
We could do it over and over again;
we could do it all day long
 
I don’t know where God would put it;
probably on a finger or our head.
Just as long as it was available,
 when something said had to be unsaid.
 
You’ve probably never gave this a thought
because you don’t make many errors.
But those of us that do make mistakes,
would probably really care.
 
Just think of the advantage that
we would have over all of you.
Nothing ever wrong recorded,
and only good things listed too.
 
We could change our tests in school
or redo the mistakes of the past.
It would be wonderful if mistakes could be undone,
so they wouldn’t last?
 
But since God didn’t put erasers on his creation of man.
I think HE wants us to get it right the first time or do the best we can.
 
 
Written by,
Bonnie May

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Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
I love John Leko's comment. lol. I would like an erasure like yours. But you wrote about the bad feelings we have when we find we have done something wrong. Yes, I could do without the pain, guilt, shame also. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on May 16, 2008
...great write Bonnie...come to think of it...that is how I lost all my hair.
John

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 16, 2008
Problem with erasers are that they come indiscriminate, they will erase the bad and the good, better let it alone, after all the bad bumps teach us no to go shuffling in life, bump, and fall on our faces

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 14, 2008
love this!!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 14, 2008
Personally I just hit backspace then delete...:-) ed


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