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Come Out and See”
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What a night this was...


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“Come Out and See”
 
 
I awoke quite parched one summer, in the middle of the night.
I decided to get a drink when I had a terrible fright.
Someone was in my living room, I knew it without seeing.
I could see his movement; I could hear his breathing,
 
I was frozen with fear to the spot, I didn’t move an inch.
I thought of many things to do that would have been a cinch.
But it was like my brain and body had a disconnect.
The two weren’t working together, I was totally a wreck.
 
Then I heard a little voice speaking out to me.
Oh my gosh it’s a child, who can this child be?
I reached for the light switch and turned the bright lights on.
And there right before my eyes, was my neighbor’s precious son.
 
“Ronny, what are you doing here, it’s the middle of the night?”
“I have no idea how I got down here, I woke up in a fright.”
Oh my darling little boy, you must have walked in your sleep.
I’ll take you back to your Mommy & Daddy, now don’t you weep.
 
So we both went out the back door, the same way he came down.
I realized then how dangerous it was, for there was a hole in the ground.
We were putting in a swimming pool and the hole was wide and deep.
He could have fallen in it and I wouldn’t have heard a peep.
 
Chills running up my spine, we proceeded on our way.
Banging on the neighbor’s window, at this awful time of day.
“What in the world’s the matter,” Donna asked of me?
“I have Ronny here out here, come out here and see.”
 
“Bonnie are you crazy, Ronny’s been in bed for hours, he’s fast asleep.”
“I’ll talk to you tomorrow; I’m sure all this will keep.”
“If Ronny’s there with you, then who in the world is with me?”
“Am I’m the one that’s sleep walking, come our here and see?”
 
Written by,
Bonnie May
 
 
 

  


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 Reviews of "Come Out and See”"
Reviewed on December 12, 2008
Dear Bonnie,

Great photo . . . you have a keen sense of humor which has been weaved so well into this finely penned write!!


Hugs and Love,

Lance

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on May 30, 2008
hee, hee, hee....
I love the ending!
Too funny!

Cryssa

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on May 25, 2008
lol. I was so convinced until the end and now I have my doubts as to who was sleep walking. lol. Great write. Liz

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 25, 2008
Bonnie, what a barrel of fun you are! Your grandchildren most me thrilled to have you around with all those stories.
Great Nana!

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 24, 2008
wow--pretty scary!!

Reviewed on May 24, 2008
Life with you is never dull! What a hilarious write - well done, Bonnie!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on May 24, 2008
I can't decide which of you was dreaming but it's a dramatic tale, for sure. You have a way of getting us caught up in your many adventures.

Love,
Connie

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on May 24, 2008
Ooh, loved the ending...great write, you held me captive until the final line and then for a while after that, lingered on my thoughts. Enjoyed this much, reminded me of a poem that I read when I was in college. Thought provoking indeed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed on May 24, 2008

Bonnie well written narrative through your expressive poetry, from introduction to conclusion. Completely awesome, continued blessings to you.

Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn


Reviewed on May 24, 2008
Oh, my...a tragedy avoided by God's hand, methinks (around instead of IN the pool hole). Was back when we could leave our doors unlocked, too! A funny event, thankfully.
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 24, 2008
probably just a flashback; wasn't that fun...lol, Ed

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on May 24, 2008
Remember some of the things that happed when you lived near Donna. Amazing how you can remember too and write about them. Ron is now a grown boy and a father himself of two boys whom he loves dearly and his wife Loretta is a real sweetheart. Ron needed your guidance often when he was a wee boy growing up.

Reviewed on May 24, 2008
Delightful writing, Bonnie; always a joy to read/review you! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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