Mr. Teddy Bear (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 22, 2004

Linda
I truly believe Angels move through Teddy Bears for people who
confide in them in this way. Well done. Also, thank you for
your comments on "A Holographic Epiphany." Vicky

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on May 15, 2004

Sadly so true Linda. Well done

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2004

Very heartfelt...very sad Linda...
and so well written...touched me..floria

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on May 12, 2004

A joyful and pleasant write - well-done!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 12, 2004

touching and heartfelt ...
Linda
You are great at writing
these types of write

William

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on May 12, 2004

Linda...soul touching write...powerful as always from you my dear friend...love n luck....BHUWAN

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 12, 2004

so sad but so poetically good Linda. l&p G

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 11, 2004

All I can say is I want to swear!!!

Reviewed by Roger Richard (Reader)

Reviewed on May 11, 2004

Very well written Linda, I feel for you because it seems a write like that must come from experience.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on May 11, 2004

Priceless!!! The voice of children to be heard from Mr. Teddy Bear� reminds me if only these walls could talk, but I would rather listen to Mr. Teddy Bear speak through you Poet. Bravo! Hear wrenching write� but necessary!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 11, 2004

So poignant and heart wrenching. Your tender heart is showing again, Linda.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on May 11, 2004

GREAT use of Teddy bear as a symbol of those silent voices...WONDERFUL poem, Linda!

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on May 11, 2004

Your works give voice to those who can not give for themselves, you do the work we should all do, advocate for the child...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

This one moves deeply Linda.....

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

it shameful the plight that some children ungergo from the ones who should love them unconditionally, their parents ... a sad scenario within this very powerful poem ...

Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

sad so sad but one that if others who know about this read it can help them..
thank you for sharing this with us
Tommy

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

Linda, this is such a sad commentary on certain aspects of some children's lives. this is excellently portrayed from the eyes of this child...well done.
Allen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

As sad as this is, still isn't it wonderful that you have a way to let it out and the grit to do it?

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

very poignant...very well done work on a difficult subject, Linda

Reviewed by Anthony Hall

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

Linda, I loved this poem. Made me think of the reason I started writing: to deal with the pain of being emotionally abused and neglected.
Continue to remind us why we need to break the cycle!
Anthony

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

I am deeply touched by this read Linda!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

Linda, this one truly brought a tear to my eye. When I was a tiny tyke, I talked to my teddy bear a lot; but luckily, about nice things.

Your poem truly brings to light the plight of far too many abused children; and you write about their plight so gallantly.

Kudos to you once more.

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

This is so hard to read because it is so real and so sad, what great writing to convey that so realistically.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

Sad. Powerful theme well done.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

oh, this is absolutely heartbreaking! what a powerfully sad write about a situation far too many kids face; such a shame!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( >tears <

things are getting better, linda; thanks for your prayers!~

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

(((linda)))

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww so sad what teddy has to witness :(

powerful, thought provoking, heartshattering write--well done, as always

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

this would make a terrific song--