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Death Denied
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Broken glass..mangled steel
None of this seems real
Lost control..hit a tree
Blood everywhere..covering me
Police standing all around
Sirens making an errie sound
Hey policeman, I'm over here
I talk but no one can hear
I look inside the tangled maze
Standing here in a daze
Oh God, inside the car theres me
Oh no, How can this be?
I'm right here , look this way
"This man is dead" I heard him say

NO, that just can't be true
I'm standing here watching you
I have a child and loving wife
Dear God, please give me back my life
I'm not dead, I'm walking around
Beer cans the policeman found
I only had a few, please help me
Look my way..why can't you see?
I watch you as you carry me away
If I could only bring back yesterday
I just stand here in the pouring rain
Somewhere theres a whistle of a train
Lifes blood staining the ground below
I can't be dead, It can't be so...

© Linda Hill 2003


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 Reviews of "Death Denied"
Reviewed by Ross oatrander
Reviewed on March 13, 2003
WOW! A very powerful and much needed message about the subject. This one is a little close to home for me but, we all need to hear it, and it not have been said any better. Love ya my friend! Ross

Reviewed by David Mohd
Reviewed on March 5, 2003
Excellent write Linda, It reminded me something...just read my poem 'don't cry please'.u r so powerfull. thanx

Reviewed by Drkman (Reader)
Reviewed on March 5, 2003
Linda.
This is so powerful and a bit too close to home for me. Wonderfully written. Drkman

Reviewed by Red Matrix (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2003
very powerful!

-RedM

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on March 4, 2003
Excellent poem Linda...and delivering such an important message about the dangers drinking and driving.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on March 4, 2003
excellent view from outside in...

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2003
Like everyone says, this is very powerful Linda. You are doing great service to the society.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2003
An emotional writing. Sadder still when these things touch your live.
~E

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on March 4, 2003
Very powerful! I wrote a similiar poem, wierd thinking of death and what it'll be like. The loved one left behind to grieve, seem so unfair!

Reviewed on March 4, 2003
powerful, heart-piercing write! well done, linda! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :( >tears <

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2003
this was very dark and scary but very touching and emotional with sucha inspirational message you are so brilliantly a genius my angel i thank you for being my sweet friend you are so awesome just like this fantastic poem

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2003
Linda, another beautiful, empathic poem. You feel so deeply for others, and have so many wonderful, caring qualities and I do love you for the sweet, wonderful woman you are. Although from very far away and never to close the distant gap. If things every change in your life, I will be waiting for you. But I want you to be happy and feel love surrounding you from where you are. Cause if you are happy; then so am I, but like the song says, if you are ever lonely,
"Just Call My Name And I'll Be There." But I expect nothing from your except your friendship. YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER AND A GREATER PERSON. How could I not love you? Can't we be friends again? Bill

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 4, 2003
WOW! LINDA,
BEAUTIFUL DESCRIPTION OF A DRUNK DRIVER AND THEIR REGRETFUL THOUGHTS, AFTER LEARNING THE DAMAGE THEY HAD CAUSED....EXCELLENT WRITE AS USUAL.

WILLIAM

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on March 4, 2003
A mighty strong write Linda. Well done!
Jack

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2003
Linda this is so powerful..Drinking and driving is so dangerous...great write..Floria

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2003
Wow, This is a very strong write!

ty
tony:)


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