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Dear God...
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Dear God
I know you are busy and
Have so much to do
I have just one request
I want to ask of you
I have a little brother
He's only three years old
He's hurting and he's sick
Thats what I've been told

Dear God
Please heal my brother
Don't let him die
It's hard to watch Mommy
Hold him and cry
The doctor came this morning
He looked real sad
I couldn't hear what he told Mommy
But I know it was bad

Dear God
Send an angel to watch over
Him, please I pray
I hope you have time to listen
To what I have to say
Tears fall down, I just can't
Seem to understand
Please heal my little brother
Reach down and hold his hand...

© Linda Hill 2003





















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 Reviews of "Dear God..."
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
Excellent Write ...
Superb write ...


Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
Linda,
This so sad, it can make a bull bear cry
I love reading your assortment of wonderful writes

William

William

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaah :``( This was very very sad. Wonderful job on this. Teresa

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
You do these so well, Linda, it is scary the emotion you can write into them.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
So indicative of your tender heart.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
Dear Linda, Caring, a virtue you possess. Writing talent is also a forte. Beautiful piece, Linda.
God Bless You



Love
yf
tony

Reviewed on April 2, 2003
(((linda))) heartbreaking and oh, so sad...but well written...(((HUGS))) *tears* and love, karla. :(

Reviewed on April 2, 2003
sad write, but shows the innocence of a child who is only concerned for her little brother who is sick! wonderful emotions and feelings! love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) :(

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
What a beautiful prayer straight from your heart! I know that God will hear you and will answer. ~Joseph

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
A sad and touching poem Linda
Chrissie

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
Yes Linda Mae, you write from your heart. You write so well when using your empathic skills. This poem has meaning and depth. Freedom is relative. Remember. Do you know the Serenity Prayer. "God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, and to change the things I can?" A meaningful and deep prayer. So in the child who is dying above and in our own lives; we have a lot of accepting to do. Love you for your faith and your deliverance. This is who I know and who I care for. Good for you ! Angel of many!

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
Such a sad write. Well done Linda.
Jack

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
this was so beautifully sad and heartwrenching awesome job on this one and people wonder why you are an angel of caring this poem definitly proves that

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
Very sad LInda...good poem..Floria

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
Linda, Beautiful write. So sad. My friend you need a pick me up poem.


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