Faded rose
Now cold and unyielding
Losing its
Sweet fragrance
Its petals slowly
Dropping
As dreams blown
Away by the wind
Its stem bending
As if
In torment
Of living
Faded rose
Painful briars
Protecting
Its delicate beauty
Not allowing anyone
Inside
Red velvet holding
Precious nectar
Wilted and alone
Its mysteries
Go untouched
Unleashed
Linda,
You and Your poetry as heavenly
As the rose was meant to be.
Love & peace ... William
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on April 19, 2003
This is very beautiful, Linda
Love from India - Joel -
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 19, 2003
Dear Linda, This poem although well written with much emotion. Unfortunately it is negative emotion. This writing bothers me. I really cannot understand your thinking. You are the dealer in the card game of life. You have to make that important decision. Stay or Leave.
This was quite beautiful Linda, So very touching and poignant, Your poetry always touches me so deeply,
Beautifully sad,
Reindeer
Reviewed by William M. Sowman
Reviewed on April 19, 2003
No that is not true. There are many in this world who can and will love you just the way you are. You cannot turn back the hands of time to another era, and choosing those who are from a newer and younger era
makes your life a mismatch that doesn't fit your choices. The comparison of youth and wanting to share your life beyond its pale, is what is shredding your heart. Look to those who can love you on a mature level and rise to that level. You are a mature Lady. Let your heart be free, but your choices be differernt. I never ever wanted to hurt you. But you thought I did. I only wanted to love you and you were seeking something else I could not give you. Now is time to pick up the pieces of your life and move on to better things. I wish you only good luck and happiness. And changes will come whether you make the choices or not. Nature does that to us. Bill
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Very touching write...
Trixie :)
You and Your poetry as heavenly
As the rose was meant to be.
Love & peace ... William
Love from India - Joel -
Love yf
tony
when in full bloom
Then it gently fade
It colour changes
But the real beauty of a rose
is always inside
It is upto the rose
to keep that true beauty
Sandie Angel :o)
Beautifully sad,
Reindeer
makes your life a mismatch that doesn't fit your choices. The comparison of youth and wanting to share your life beyond its pale, is what is shredding your heart. Look to those who can love you on a mature level and rise to that level. You are a mature Lady. Let your heart be free, but your choices be differernt. I never ever wanted to hurt you. But you thought I did. I only wanted to love you and you were seeking something else I could not give you. Now is time to pick up the pieces of your life and move on to better things. I wish you only good luck and happiness. And changes will come whether you make the choices or not. Nature does that to us. Bill