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Don't Let Me Die
by Linda M Hill → (All Poetry by Linda M Hill)
  
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Laying here I feel
So alone
Memories come
Then they are gone
Chest hurting
So much pain
I hear the pounding
Of the rain
I am not ready
To die
Lord, hear my
Humble cry
Theres so much
I haven't done
I want to live
To touch the sun
I want to feel
My childrens kiss
So many things
I will miss
To soon I feel
My end is near
I try to wipe
Away a tear


Hearts left broken
I need to mend
Letters written
I need to send
Theres "I love you "s
I need to say
All these I put off
For another day
Thinking time
Was all I had
Oh God, it hurts
So bad
I can't breath
Tightness smothering me
Is this to be
My destiny
So many words
Left unsaid
Too late to say
Them when I'm dead

Simple things
I didn't understand
That time is not
Promised to any man
That in and instant
We can be gone
That hour of death
Is never known
How I will miss
Dew on the rose
Walking barefoot
Sand between my toes
A hot cup of coffee
A butterflys flight
The moonlight glow
A romantic night
So much I'll miss
I can't comprehend
The years of my life
Have came to and end
What I would give
For just one more day
To make up for the
Mistakes of yesterday...

© Linda Hill 2003


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 Reviews of "Don't Let Me Die"
Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on May 17, 2003
Incredible.
Don't waste another minute not loving.
I know you don't.
John

Reviewed by J. Cheek (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
Powerful poem. Touching and so true.
John

Reviewed on April 25, 2003
touching and heartfelt write! :( (((HUGS)))

Reviewed on April 24, 2003
This was so deep and touching, I felt this one so deeply,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Poetic Souljah (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
This is a great poem. keep up the good work. your poem is full with heart and soul. Call out to good and believe and your wish will be granted

a girl with heart and soul and love for others
Poetic souljah

Reviewed by Angelica Young (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
WOW I really Loved this one and it was so sad :(

Love Angie

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
Your work is profound, Linda.

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
You wil have all these things in the life after... There is no end to this love... We will all meet again someday.. some way!! Great write.. I know that fear.

Reviewed by Tony
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
Dear Linda, Relax my child. I will no let you die. You were right aout the snake. Wow he changes his name as much as he changes skin. He lives in California, so my son will drive me there as soon as i find out were he lives. He respondes as the poet writing click.


Be Well and Smile
God Loves You
Tony

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
Linda, outstanding write as always, Your words are always so meaningful and heartfelt. That is the making of a great writer.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
Beautiful Linda! Touching! Heartfelt! (no pun intended). You have use a stroke of genius when you write using your empathic skills. Remember that ok. Hugs Bill

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
it's never too late...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
Linda,
This one touched me a freightening reality but choosing whom to speak with last is important
Peggy

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
If you haven't got it close to right by then, come back.

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
Linda, thi is a very heartfelt and touching write.

May God be with You

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by J. R. Corbin
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
Linda,
you always leave us with so much to think about. I'm not sure if that's a good thing! lol....of course it is, and I thank you.
Jim :)


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