Santa, I'm not asking
For much this year
I don't want any toy's
Or teddy's to hold near
Santa, I don't want presents
Wrapped in green and red
I just have one wish, Santa
Before I go to bed
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I miss my Daddy so much
Since he went to Heaven
Jesus took him to the sky
From the tragedy of nine eleven
Could you talk to Jesus
This I want you to say
Ask if I can borrow Daddy
Just for Christmas day
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Santa, you can talk to Jesus
God's angel can bring him home
I'll explain to Mommy
We have him just on loan
I have it all worked out
If Jesus will listen to you
I want to see Mommy smile again
After all she's been through
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It will be hard to let him go
But I won't be sad
I'll just be so happy for the
Christmas day we had
I want to feel him hug me
Just one more time again
I want Daddy to read me a story
Just like he did back then
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Santa, is that a tear
I see in your eye
Santa, why did my Daddy
Ever have to die...
Your poem has given me goosebumps. How heart-wrenching and how sad that it real for so many children who lost a parent on that tragic day. This plea to Santa moved me to tears. Best always, Elizabeth
So touching Linda. I don't know what's worse, having your dad die and leave you or having him alive and never care or love you at all. I figured out for myself, I will have only one parent to grieve over in death, which is my mother. I'm not going to waste one tear on a man who never was a father. cheers. G
Linda...another soul touching write from you....cheers...love n luck...BHWUAN
Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)
Reviewed on December 19, 2003
Powerful with passion and you really jerked the tears from my eyes with this awesome write. As I always said, you are really a great poet, a truly inspirational one.
Love, Susan
Alex
there is a lump in my throat the size of texas--GEEZ what a powerful write
i will always remember and never forget *tears*
(((HUGS))) and may your holidays be bright
love,
karla. :(
love Tinka
God Bless
~Michelle~
Much love angel,
John
This is beautiful just like
your soul.
Peg
Happy Holidays Sweetie!
I wish you and yours blessings both large and small this Holiday season!
Bunches o' hugs,
Tami
Have the Seasons best my friend..
TRASK
Happy Holidays!!