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Cinquain
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The Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of 2,4,6,8,2 syllables....love it! Here's my first attempt....


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She’s trapped
Within her mind
There’s no escaping
The ravaging brutality
Of time
 
 
- Living with Dementia by Annabel Sheila

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 Reviews of "Cinquain"
Reviewed by Daniel Keith
Reviewed on September 6, 2010
A few short words yet so intense. May God bless you every day of your life.

Daniel

Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on September 5, 2010
A wonderful job and good deep subject matter.

Reviewed by David Maclellan
Reviewed on September 5, 2010
Very clever Annabel, and with a poignant message about the sadness of Dementia
blessings to you
David

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on September 4, 2010
A sad story captured so well in your cinquain.

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on September 4, 2010
You must have visited my mother this morning:-)Patrick

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 3, 2010
Quite powerful, Annabel.

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
Wow! So often the fewer words the stronger the message... Very good, my friend.
Mark

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
I could spend all day observing your photograph. Difficult to stand by and watch loved ones slip away into a void...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
Your poem captures it well!
Sleek and well said ~
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
I am not familiar with this style of poetry. However it had the correct syllables. And it was very good, IMHO.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
In my humble opinion, this is a fine cinquain that expresses your chosen theme very well, Annabel. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
I think Annabel you have captured a picture very well. Thanks for adding the last item on Dementia. It makes the piece that much more poignant.

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
Captivating use of words. But, I have to ask, is it time that is being brutal or is it disease?


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