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My Temple
by D. L. Vegas → (All Poetry by D. L. Vegas)
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My temple-
Is sacred

Not many
Have entered

For I have
The key

You must show
Honesty and truthfulness

And that your love
Is from your heart and soul

Your eyes
Must never Lie

I give the key
Entrusting you

Do not forsake me
But become as one...



  

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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on February 26, 2014
Two lines: "Your eyes/Must never Lie (with a Capital L)" could be an entire 'credo' for true 'civilization.' ~~ Diana

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 30, 2013
if your gut instinct is: rainz a comin, wear a psychic umbrella ...

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on December 20, 2013
Sacred places are very special places, and only those with grace and beauty can truly share those realms.

Peace,

Dayvid

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on December 19, 2013
wondefully worded and penned
budd

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on December 17, 2013
D
Always entrust that key to the person who will unlock the door to your sacred place wigh the utmost of love and care!
Wonderful poem!
Peace and love
Amber

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 17, 2013
You've set your standards high… May they be fulfilled.

Ron

Reviewed on December 17, 2013
I know what yo mean. So many come as wolves in sheep's disguise. Guard you temple as you are doing and you will let the right one enter.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 17, 2013
... Glad your temple is under construction, Deborah; I wouldn't trust or touch THAT one with a barge pole! :) I like the voicing in this piece and the short-lined couplets; impresses the reader with just how seriously entering in this contract/building should be taken. You create a sense of hallowed-halls here. xx

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on December 17, 2013
It can't be said more plainly that this, Deborah, and I hope and trust you will find that very special one to hand the key to.


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