The Tale Of The Bonnie Rose
(Fee's Halloween Challenge)
After three hundred years lost at sea
The Bonnie Rose, she ran aground
Been caught in a storm on Halloween
Not ship nor crew ever found
Though her sails were slightly yellowed
And her wood had lost its sheen
She seemed no worse for all the years
Though in the drink she'd surely been
Moving closer I heard a groan
From within her weathered hull
Then from her deck, some shrieking cries
From the skeleton of a gull
The crew was still upon her deck
Their clothes faded, tattered and torn
Swabbing her down and wiping her rails
And replacing ropes that were worn
Way atop of the tallest mast
In a crow's nest, on the high
Still perched a sailor, at his post
Telescope perusing the sky
Toward the aft the Captain stood
A patch slung across one eye
His right hand molded to the helm
In his left a bottle of Rye
Beneath the deck a creaky door
Exposed the galley down below
Upon the table a jack-o-lantern
Still held a candle's glow
Wisping through the musty air
Sailed the ghost of Halloween
Each year he came onto the ship
By one mortal to be seen
He ordered me to convey the tale
Of the fate of the Bonnie Rose
And how the ghost of Halloween
Held that ship at his dispose
I wandered through each inch of her
Through every hall and every room
The entire crew was still aboard
This had become their living tomb
They were committed to a watery grave
Held deep within the sea
Each Halloween she'd run ashore
And will for eternity.
A sailor told me I must go
Or join the fate of the crew and ship
So I quickly stepped onto the shore
As Bonnie Rose began to tip
A shipman rang out twelve long bells
A mournful chorus I did hear
The Bonnie Rose just slipped away
Swallowed up for another year
Sherry Heim
October 29, 2008
Copyright © Sherry Gail Heim 2008
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.
Sheila
Regis
I love your story-line and the life you brought it!
I love the imagery you brought to life!
Into my libray for a later reading also!
The Hull,helm,the yellowed sails/etc.
Amazing writing!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and WARM Hugs, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
STay Positive!
Ron
Happy Halloween!;-)
Love,
Eileen
This is a wonderful tale!!! Very interesting!!!
Happy Halloween to you too!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
God Bless,
Lew
hugs
Fee
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I enjoyed the visions you put to pen with pleasure.