Was built over an ancient burial ground
Beknownst – the spirits from below
took over all the amusement park rides
They would move you like never before.
And once you got on, you never got off
Except afterwards when you were d-e-a-d
Sorry, no refunds – won’t even pay for the
funeral expenses, nor headstone with R.I.P.
Ghostly figures riding atop a carriage with
glass panels etched with the words ‘Funeral
Hearse’, drawn by four black horses; worked
‘round the clock – threw bodies in the swamp.
Graven images with mournful images floated
near the surface – their hands reaching out
looking for someone to come and save them
Could hear their moaning for miles around.
As the unfortunates hit the pavement from
a bird-eye’s view, you’d witness their souls
being pulled down below – to the Indian’s
sacred ground; there you remained imprisoned.
You could only be released if the U. S. Gov’t.
gave back a part of the Native American’s land
that was taken – one where an ancestor was
buried and which was desecrated knowingly.
Screams went on well into the night, and
would continue – until such time as the
owners who were Custer’s descendants, pad-
locked the place and closed it down forever.
‘2009’ RLS
Love Tinka
You can always set the atmosphere so well.
Sandie Angel :o)
Freaky, scary and visually very strong, the images leap up at the reader from the page, and with more than a surface meaning there's depth and wisdom here, as well.
John
Freaky write!
Hugs,
Christine
Be always safe,
Karen
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :/
Cheers,
Dan
"... They would move you like never before
And once you got on, you never got off
Except afterwards when you were d-e-a-d ..." YIPE.
Think I'll keep my feet on the ground, where they belong!!! My new favorite of yours, Lance, well done! CHILLINGLY effective!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.