AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Connie Amarel, iPamela Ackerson, iWilliam Cottringer, iDiane Hundertmark, iDean Cambourakis, i Dadfire, iLinda Frank, iWilliam Potter, iDavid Young, iElla Rydzewski, i

  Home > Relationships > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Poetry
· Stories
· 454 Titles
· 9,961 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Sep, 2002

Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



Farewell My Friend
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook


Poem Artwork

Land of the Muse Challenge Poem

The Challenge: To use the phrase:

“So Long, farewell”



Farewell My Friend


I am looking out at the world today,
From the top of my mountain,
How beautiful the sunset is,
All red and golden…

The clouds are floating by,
And if I reach out I swear I can touch the sky!
Such a beautiful way to end this day,
Just sitting quietly watching the sky slowly fade away…

So strange to think this is the end,
The last day of our friendship,
There have been too many storms
And my heart is aching.

Strange to think how it all begin,
Me saving you from yourself,
Teaching you to think about the things you say.
You’ve come a long way,
But the end is nigh,
And I am going away.

Oh how I remember those dark days,
When it all began…
I never thought I’d have a friend again,
It was far too hard on my heart and spirit,
Far too hard on me-

I didn’t need friends then,
I had my books and writings,
My forest and peace,
I had everything I needed.

Except a friend to share my dreams with,
A friend who cared about me…

(Ah my lovely friend,
You saved me too.)


But the times have changed,
And the hours we share now are so few,
I know its time to let go,
We both have other things to do.


So I will sit here and watch this beautiful day end,
The way our friendship ended,
And then I will say to you,
“So long, farewell my friend,
It’s time I traveled on alone…





Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "Farewell My Friend"
Reviewed by Jimmy Mills
Reviewed on December 2, 2006
Rein--A masterpiece at best. BTW, I'm not going anywhere. We are friends for life! Get use to it. :-) Jim

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on October 31, 2006
What a beautiful haunting poem. It touches my heart...M

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on August 19, 2006
this poem of yours is absolulely a gem.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2006
so touching..you have such a big heart..wish you lived nextdoor to me..
I could use a true friend..

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2006
You are a good friend.

Beautifully said...



Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on July 11, 2006
An elegant farewell and saying goodbye is
oh so sad. Moving Retta!

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on July 10, 2006
grace, dignity, & transcendence herein, retta. beautifully expressed.
peace,
carolyn

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2006
Beautiful piece and beautiful photo.
Simply beautiful, Retta!

Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on June 27, 2006
i wouldnt want you to sat farewell to me....maybe see ya...
but you have done very good with this write!!!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2006
Dear Reindeer,

What a beautiful way to say "farewell". Your poetry is so down to earth and filled with the spirit.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on June 26, 2006
Sad emotion filled lines Retta but written with grace and beauty.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 25, 2006
farewell can be hard to say but you have eloquently done so, in this beautiful poem ...

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on June 25, 2006
Sometimes that's how life is, kinda sad when friends part.
Nice work

Blue skies and sunshine
HH

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 25, 2006
Whatever you write, it's great!
Have a great day!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 25, 2006
Bittersweet, full of heartfelt emotion, and very very good, Reindeer.

And what a marvelous picture.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on June 25, 2006
Outstanding write
Good challenge
enjoyed

William
LOve & Peace

Reviewed on June 25, 2006
A very intriguing write. I absolutely love that message. Sometimes we just have to move on, even if it means being alone...

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 25, 2006
So gentle yet sad, though we all must travel on alone...
A beaut of a soul you do indeed have....

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2006
Retta...beautiful poetry full of love from your inner being.
Susan

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 24, 2006
This brings tears from the well of my soul, Retta; that is because I can relate so well to what you express via your verses here. Thank you for sharing this soul-reaching gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on June 24, 2006
Beautiful write from a beautiful heart, Retta. You have amazing talent.

~Linda

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on June 24, 2006
Beautiful and heartbreaking poem, Reindeer. Your verses stand alone with or without the challenge line and your images are both intense and tangible. Your writings often take my breath away and this is one of those times.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 24, 2006
Beautiful touching verse....challenge well met!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2006
This is not only serene and scenic but outstanding. I hope you were given vote for this challenge. Beautifull.
"

But the times have changed,
And the hours we share now are so few,
I know its time to let go,
We both have other things to do.
"

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 24, 2006
Reindeer, the beauty of the art and poem combine to make this an outstanding work! I love the way you so eloquently wrote this one!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on June 24, 2006
Golden lines filled with poignant emotion and spiritual grace. Captures fully the intimate substance of relationships and parting.
Aberjhani

Reviewed on June 24, 2006
A beautifully moving eulogy and write, Reindeer, very well penned.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on June 24, 2006
Wonderful poem, one I can relate to so well. In fact, I've been writing a poem on saying farewell to someone as well. You make it sound so peaceful, so right. But to me, it is heart-breaking. It seems as though every aspect of life is such a struggle. Even something as simple as friendship. ~ Sara

Reviewed on June 24, 2006
It isn't easy to say goodbye; very well done! LOL at Jerry's comment!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2006
I panicked when I read the title. Don't DO that! Very well written pice of poetical poetry with the premise of love/friendship sour'd. Very good.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on June 24, 2006
Saying goodby, farewell, so long, or Get Lost, isn't easy.
But, you make it so tender and meaningful, I almost wish you were my FORMER friend. - That's good work. Sharing it is a morning joy.
- Bill

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 24, 2006
I'm glad this is not a farewell but a challenge for us to write one that will never be as good as that which you have written. The pic is as beautiful as the poem.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on June 24, 2006
Retta
This is a wonderful and spontaneous response to the challenge..
Kudos to you
God Bless
Peter


New Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Popular Poetry (Relationships)
  1.  If my Dad knew
  2.  Christian Friendship
  3.  Budding Relationships
  4.  Me and You
  5.  Good-bye
  6.  Mind Fog
  7.  SURROUNDED
  8.  Keep Me Safe
  9.  Between Crescent Moons
  10.  Along the Wayside
  11.  The meaning of love
  12.  Life As I Now Know It
  13.  Your Fascist Heart!
  14.  A Simple Hug
  15.  When Dreams Come True
  16.  Ode To My Cat Woman
  17.  That Darn Bumble Bee
  18.  When A Man Loves A Woman
  19.  Happily Ever After
  20.  Serenity
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

When The Moon Knows Your Name by Jon Willey

A collection of love poetry both relatable and unique.. Poems both joyful, playfu , yearning and romantic. The Poet has exposed his heart and soul in words of love and admiration. Take a journey through the thoughts of a Contempary poet of love. Poet  
Member BookAds

Pathological Narcissism FAQs by Sam Vaknin

Dozens of Frequently Asked Questions regarding Pathological Narcissism, relationships with abusive narcissists, and the Narcissistic Personality Disorder.  
Member BookAds

Standing On My Knees by Pinkstone

I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work. I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of  
Member BookAds