Blood On The Moon (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente

Reviewed on August 5, 2003

PERFECTION! Dear RD. From the heart to the pen without error.

Bonnie

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 24, 2003

Awesome write Retta.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on July 24, 2003

A masterpiece.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 24, 2003

most beautiful love poem Retta!!

That moon is hot...I think it striked a nerve....now it is blushing!!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

Beautifully written. sometimes, we hafta go with what we feel, otherwise we miss out on all the goodness

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

Excellent write Retta ... So nice to read this ... Wonderful write giving both love and friendship ... I understand the friendship in this write. I loved that character. As a good friend its his duty to warn ... And the love will never understand their heart. That is love ... All are right when they think from the position they stand. So beautifull written. Friends Question and i belive true friendship have the right to question.
This write made me think .... each and every line you wrote from the heart. So beautiful. Keep it up.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

Very deep and exciting writing here...

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

Excellent write, Retta!!
Don't listen to omens..
just your heart...

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

Reindeer,
The spiritual feel to this one and imagery and excelling emotion is excellent.
{{{SMILES}}}
beautiful art.
PJ

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

Red sky at night, sailors delight, red sky at dawn, sailor be warned. but what do I know?

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

The combination of this photo and creation of such a wonderful love story is outstanding!!!!!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

a fantastic write and the photo is awesome!
love your reasoning;-)

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

Outstanding write of overcomeing fears Rhetta, so brilliantly and beautifully penned!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

(((reindeer)))

awesome write and that pic--GORGEOUS

go for it--i believe in you

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

Quite an AWESOME write, m'"deer", and LOVE the pic! OUTSTANDING! :) ((((HUGS))))

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

"Blood on the moon be damned" <-- I love that! You go for it Retta!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

Excellent, Retta.
Don't know if this is fiction--suspect not. Omens and fortune tellers are a shifty lot.
Best live life how you want it to be,
A diviner's just as faulty as you and me.
Folklore's intriguing, it always has been,
But life worth living's a risk, not a sin.
Best regards,
Leland