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Eternal Love
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*Dark Poetry*







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Eternal Love



The gentle winds blow,
And embers of love,
Burn anew…
Flames that sear the heart,
And torture the mind
With memories
That will not leave,
Dare not believe
You shall come again-

My friend,
You slay me with such words
Such a vision my eyes behold,
But my arms are so cold,
So cold…

Love lost in the wind,
Stirring the embers
That burn beneath the sand,
Where I buried the desire,
Now melted into glass
That reflects nothing…

I see in the earth,
Semblances of you everywhere,
In the lover’s garden I sit,
And dwell on what could never be,
Never more than a sad memory
Of what we once had,
And let slip through our fingers…

Ah me,
Such sweet sorrow,
That scores my heart,
With an edge no knife can match,
No dream can tell,
How deeply I am in hell
For loving a soul,
That exist only for me…


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 Reviews of "Eternal Love"
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2003
Absolutely beautiful
S

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
a strong write especially the last stanza, it's very deep

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2003
Excellent write. You are true . :( But Eternal Love will keep us living :) my theory of love and care.


Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
"With an edge no knife can match"---YEAH! THAT sums up this poem quite well too! Exquisite poetry. Very fine work. Library...this goes :)

Thanks,
Emilie

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
dark but wonderful write as always....thank u....BHUWAN

Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
love finds you when you least expect it...but, yes, you have captured it's torture well.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
Eternal Compassion Wanna Bet He'll Be Kicking your Door Down!

TRASK

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
Wow Retta, this is a EXCELLANT PIECE of Dark Poetry that coils and licks at every part of one's heart and soul!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed on August 7, 2003
Dark, indeed... but absolutely wonderful poem, Retta.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
Breathtaking, stirring poetry. Wonderfully done Reindeer
~Chrissie

Reviewed on August 7, 2003
Wow, I caught my breath with this, Reindeer... excellent...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
'For loving a soul,
That exists only for me..'
..and this soul is you and you are this soul..know ,dear heart, that 'many are called but few are chosen'..so, many Twin Flames lost each other BUT all is not lost for you shall connect again..all that is needed is earnest INTENT..claim and accept..the universe will do the rest..you, my dear friend will be very pleasantly surprised..do let me know when it manifests...thankyou for this most precious write.

Vesna

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
Reindeer you crushed me with this one! You are the best in this genre!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
Now, this is a beauty!!!!

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
The depth of sorrow in this poem comes through the screen to pierce the reader's heart. You are a gem.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
Just beautiful.

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
Stellar dark poem and perfect pic!
Great job, Reindeer.
Jill :)

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
Deep sorrow and pain felt in this.

~Joseph

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
Whew!

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
it just isnt fair...why do we have to hurt so, why does love give us pain when it is such a beautiful thing. If I knew the answers I would gladly share with you, to ease your pain.
I could read your poetry all day and never tire. This was exquisite.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
The photo and poem flowed together perfectly.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
An awesome piece!! ;)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
Heartwrenchingly dark it is to a tender heart!!

Love Tinka
< < <TEARS>>>

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
Your poetry is always so beautiful and expressive, you bare your very soul. Jackie <> <

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on August 6, 2003
To exist for one and only one is wonderful when it goes both ways but tragic when one can not respond the same.
Such a waste then.... your poem is awesome,you really know how to hit the nail on the head and you do it like no other,very unique.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 6, 2003
Wonderfully written as always, Rein.
Kudos!

tony:)


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