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Our Love Will Last Forever...
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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* For you my love, Hope you hear me clearly...*



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Once I thought,
I would never love again,
Never choose to have a friend,
Didn't see the need,
To make my heart bleed,

Stayed in my forest,
Living the life I love,
Missed having a friend,
But knew it wasn't worth it,
In the end…

Then I heard a voice,
Crying in the night,
I tried so hard to ignore it,
But it touched my heart so deeply…
I found I had no choice…

I followed the sound,
And saw you there,
All alone,
Sitting on my lovely stone,
Head buried in your hands,
Gentle tears on your face,
And I wanted to embrace you,
Tell you, "wait I am here-"

But my heart was full of fear…

Knowing your lovely heart,
Would tear my wall apart…
I tried to walk away,
But you bid me to stay…

Just talk to me,
God, couldn't you see
What your tears were doing to me?
Making cracks form in my heart,
I didn't want to start,
Caring for you,
But what could I do?

The more I listened to you,
The more I realized,
Your heart was true ,
So beautiful, so lovely,
My God…
What made you…?
You?

You told me your dreams,
Your loves,
Your hopes for the future,
The love in your heart for others
The beautiful love you have for your mother…

I came to love you,
So slowly,
So carefully,
Holding back a piece of me,
Keeping it safe,
Waiting to see,
If you were as real,
As me…

But every word you said,
Filled my heart with dread-
For here I found a man,
Who made me forget-
I was dead…

I have found my soul again,
My heart has began to beat,
My hands tremble when I hear you speak,
And I love how you have begin to teach
Me to trust again…

But it's your laugh,
That makes me smile,
I love it so fresh and pure,
So beautiful to hear in my heart,

My love,
We shall never part,
I shall carry you forever in my heart,
And hear your sweet voice echoing at night,
In my dreams...

I love you,
I shall love you forever,
And never forget the first time,
You whispered to me;

"Can I tell you something?
I love you babe,
Want you always near,
Protect you from your fear,
I will love you even if you don't love me,
But would love to see,
You say you love me too…"

Well, baby,
Will this do?

I love you…
More than my own life,
Will always love being your wife,
Now and forever,
I will never
Forget that one day,
When I saw you,
And you saw me too…






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 Reviews of "Our Love Will Last Forever..."
Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
This touches the heart and soul. Truly beautiful, Reindeer.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
I love this one! Beautiful poem and a beautiful picture to match it.

Reviewed on August 22, 2003
"Our Love Will Last Forever..." an oustanding picture of a true heart's feelings.

It dances under the sounds of love in a very inspiring way. "Our Love Will Last Forever..." may every couple say.

I thank You for sharing Your tresures.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on August 22, 2003
beautiful write, reindeer; truly enjoyed this masterpiece! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
What a thing of beauty, a pure pleasure to read.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
True love abounds ... this is so beautiful!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
You just know how to touch my heart Retta...and you did it once more... < < <Tears>>>
If only they would listen hey!!
I just adore your work...it speaks to me!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Retta...gem... world class write...sth to be treasured forever!!!!

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Retta! This is absolutely breathtaking. Such depth of feeling!

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Retta only a blind and deaf fool could not hear and see you and this beautiful touching excellant romantic write!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Romantic You!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
If he never heard this then he's a loser

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
A fantastic write ... Reindeer
Wonderful reading

William

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
I love your writing Reindeer! This is Great!

Jack

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Beautiful, my friend..
I hope you have found
love in your heart..
Awesome poem!

~~Linda~~

Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Reindeer, these words are ringing in my ears... excellent..... I love your writes...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
See, those woods had a surprise for you?
Awesome as always............

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Well Reindeer, this poem is a love song! Well done, as always!

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Oh, my dear. How exquisite to read. Kudos!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
This is beautiful and hearth touching. Great write!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Another touching and wonderful write Retta, well penned...~SH~

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Amazing write, well crafted.
Typical write of yours, Rein. Outstanding!

Lyf
tony:)


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