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Whispering Winds
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Whispering Winds



The winds blow through the trees,
Making them shiver,
And they whisper among themselves,
That someone new has entered the forest,

Walking along the trails,
They watch him,
And warn of his coming,
Whispering to me;
“Beware,
A stranger draws near…”

They warn me of the beauty
They see in your eyes,
The whispering winds,
Led me to you,
Warning me to beware
Of the love they see inside…

On a path of dark beauty,
I heard a sound,
And turned to find,
You staring at me…

I could not bear the sadness
In your lovely eyes,
Nor watch the tears fall
So silently to the earth below…

And I went to you,
Though the winds whispered
“Stay back, stay away…”
But I could not that day…

Nor any day after,
I loved you,
From the first moment
You came into my view…

I held your hands,
And felt the love flow,
Filling my heart,
With peace and beauty,
Ah, but my trust is slow,
And the winds whisper;

“You don’t know…”
But I do,
I know one thing alone,
I love you…

My heart whispers,
You love me too…
Shall we sit here forever?
And listen to the winds whisper
A new tune?




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 Reviews of "Whispering Winds"
Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
the winds are whispering this is beautiful and I agree. peace

Reviewed by Digital Fairy
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
Oh, this took my breath away, moved me to the core... A fine weave of romance and poetry :)

--Karissa

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
Hauntingly beautiful.
~Chrissie

Reviewed on September 2, 2003
a gentle and tender write; thoroughly enjoyed! :D (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
A beautiful piece. One must listen
to the whispering wind! ;)

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
{insert heartfelt sigh here} Ahhhhhhhh.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
A lovely and tender read.

~Joseph

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
Exceptional write!!!!

Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
Beautiful, Retta.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
Yes, tell those jealous winds, what do they know :):) Sensational, Reindeer
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
Such softness upon the breeze with these words. Wonderful write, Reindeer.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
Awesomely haunting but beautiful Retta!!

We are whispering the night away...lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
Very wonderful write, these whispering winds.

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
Awesomely haunting and mystical !

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
Reindeer,such haunting beauty! You always make it exciting;-)!

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
I love how you personified the wind, Retta! I could just hear that tiny whooshing voice zipping around me in graceful distress!! :)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
romantic excellence!

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
The whispers that echo in the recesses of our minds are there to keep us cautious of step, but never let them stop your journey.
-James

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
This is perfect. A gem of romance at its best.

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
excellent write ,.... Superb ...


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