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Face In The Moon
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Face in the Moon




I saw your face in the moon tonight,
Such a lovely sight,
Your ebony hair studded with stars,
Your eyes shinning so bright…

I saw you tonight,
And my heart was filled with such longing,
Wondering why you left us too soon,
Why it is your face I see in the moon…

I remember the way you danced,
So beautiful to see,
Your arms raised high,
As though pleading to the sky,
To carry you away,
Save you from today…

I remember your singing,
In a voice so clear,
I hear you now,
Feeling you so near…

I saved your tears,
Put them on too white pages,
Though the words were often smeared,
They can be read still,

I saw you in the moon tonight,
Your lovely face framed with silver light,
And I wonder what made you run,
All too soon into that dark night…

I lit the fires tonight,
Sending my love your way,
Singing your songs to all who would listen,
Telling the story of your life,
So you would not be forgotten…

I miss you now,
My heart so empty and sad,
My life without the meaning,
It once had…

But I saw you tonight,
And my heart was glad,
You smiled at me,
And I didn’t feel so bad…

Perhaps I felt the peace,
You always wanted to find,
Perhaps I finally understood,
You ran from a world,
That was never kind…

Everyone says you’re at peace now,
No more fighting or tears,
No more fears,
Just sweet silence and the soft night,
Covering you forever in moonlight…

I look up and see you,
Smiling down at me,
You’re last words,
Lying softly on my heart,

“We will never be apart,
I will be with you forever,
Dear Sister,
I am buried in your heart…”

But still I feel so far apart,
Though I see you in the lovely moon,
You left us all too soon,
And I wish you were here with me,
Then I wouldn’t have to look up to see,
You staring down at me…

Wondering how I am,
Ah me, such a pain in my heart,
Trying so hard to understand,
It was time for you to travel on,
I just wish so badly,
You were still here with me…

But for now,
When my soul is unquiet,
And my heart beats too hard,
I go out and close the door quietly,
And stare up into the night sky,
And whisper good-bye…




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 Reviews of "Face In The Moon"
Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on February 29, 2004
What a sweet poem of loss. Wonderfully written

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on February 28, 2004
Retta, this is the most elegant expression of mourning I've ever read. You not only conveyed the longing and sadness, the confusion and realizations, you did it in a simple way that speaks to the heart.

Gina

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2004
Oh, Retta, this is so moving I don't know where to begin. Anyone who has ever lost a loved one can see themselves in these shadows. I loved how you conveyed such thoughts.

♫ Jackie

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 23, 2004
i was totally absorbed in this sad yet moving poem ... great write!

Reviewed on February 23, 2004
in one word: GORGEOUS!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on February 23, 2004
This is so sad but beautifully written...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on February 22, 2004
this is a beauty, Reindeer

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
a wonderful write reindeer


William

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
"Face In The Moon", is a very touching poem about that final good-bye, we all dread. It takes time to understand the loss -- our human heart is heavy with it. Good, sensitive writing, Retta. I was moved by it.

Carmen

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
Beautiful is all that is required.

Reviewed on February 21, 2004
Wonderful write, Retta! Beautiful choice of words!

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
This is so, so beautiful, Reindeer. This touched me to the core. Beautifully expressed.

Reviewed by evan horetsky
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
wonderfully expressed emotional write...it almost makes me feel lost just reading it.
Many loves,
Evan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
Sad but beautiful poetry Retta!!

Did you ever read "Face in the moon" by Mitch Waldman?

This title reminded me of that beautiful story!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
Retta, this is full of the love and longing for a lost Sister. Only lost from sight for you extend your caring heart through her memories. Excellent poem. Lisa

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
Beautiful, and full of sadness.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
A delightful moment.

Reviewed on February 21, 2004
Retta this is superb...one of your best, I think.

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
wow...Retta, this is good!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Sad. Longinly yearning. Moving. Thank you for this offering, Retta. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Reindeer, your work is always superb, brilliant, and a joy to read!

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
I can feel your loss and the pain in your heart, your not alone, take care, beautifully written Retta.

Nancy

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Heartfelt as well as a special write..
Thanks for sharing Reindeer....

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Beautiful heart touching write!

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Lots of emotion.
Profound write.
Makes me want to cry.
Brilliant poem I might add.
Thanks for reviews.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Heartbreaking.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Retta,

This is worth many re-reads Retta...I am saving this..BRILLIANT work..

Debashish

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Something from heart, feeling and emotions ...
Puting something out of heart via words is different ...
You always does that and keep urself simple ...
Thanks for sharing ...



Sanilunath G


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