Forgiveness is as freeing for the one who receives it as for the one who grants it...
Absolution
Soft soothing snowflakes swirl Through the open portal of my soul Melt Assuage the flaming fires of my fevered mind Bless me mother for I havesinned I’ve prayed Yes prayed with fire Look at me Naked I am Not ashamed Your endless insults are powerless I absolve you As I am “Mea culpa” Is no longer Part of my consciousness
A most beautiful image Regis and a nice poem to go along with it. Don't feel like the flow is 100% perfect but very well written content-wise. Thanks for sharing.
Good, Regis. Get that mea culpa out of there. Forgiveness is sweet, is it not? Actually, it is necessary to healing. This is a catharsis for you, and in being naked you are now clothed in something entirely new. Good going!
Regis,
So true, it is very liberating to forgive it sets the soul free to soar again.
Nicole
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2009
Unless I love my martyrdom and cling to it, I need not be alone in freeing myself from whatever troubles me. Great stuff Regis!!!
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2008
This is so Fabulous! (To quote the young person I work with)
The unforgiving in ones soul will darken and erode the heart.
Wonderful write!!! CarolHawks
Regis,
The line "Naked I am" is deeply meaningful in this work. Those words capture volumes. The opening imagery is beautiful and sets the mood; a perfect metaphor. Well done! Love and Hugs:)
Sheila
Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2007
"Naked and not ashamed", showing the achievement of the absolution. Regis, it may take me awhile to read all of your works, but, it will be a journey I look forward to very much.
My best regars,
Chris
Reviewed by Jolen Whitworth (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2007
Beautifully constructed. From the title down, this is as observing as it is absolving.
You speak words I try to live by. Bitterness and unforgiveness is like drinking poison and then expecting the one that hurt you to die. It only poisons you inside. I live free from this and am lighter because of it. To forgive allows you to soar whereas to hold onto grudges is like wading through mud. You can't do it without getting dirty.
Brilliant poem Regis. I am in awe of your writing. I have read so much of it but am making time to let you know what I really think of it.
Love Chanti
Wow that is a strong poem... Shows the beauty of self acceptance and healing as a process... What we see ourselves as should not be defined by the limitations of others vision.
Catherine
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2005
Oh, Regis, your alliteration is just marvelous, well-used... it gave me a tone as the poem went along. There is a quiet power packed in every line... the message, so accessible to the human in us all. Great piece! katy xox.
This one, too, is very good. "Naked I am, not ashamed" is the key phrase of the poem and its main achievement.
The insults, though, are confusing my interpretation a bit. To whom does that refer? Or is it "your accusations"? Please, let me know so I can understand the poem better.
Amour et paix
Mahdi
Sounds like you found your way to the Ashless Fire, Regis. We all pray with flame if only we knew it - but I'm being too obscure.
This is a very insightful poem. When human beings learn to shake off the "mea culpa" that imprisons us then we start to have a hope of fixing this sorry mess we are in.
best
Ian
very profound in it's message and the comment before the poem
can you accept forgive~ness? is a question as well for yourself
humble bare this piece gives it all
fellow poet, brother, that's all God wants of us, to approach His throne of Grace with humility and honesty. a most beautiful, respectful prayer, filled with deep wisdom. well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
If we can go to God stripped of everything then that's going to God. Good work, Regis!
Taking responsibility for all that we do is paramount if any relationship is to survive. Giving and receiving forgiveness is the glue that holds two hearts together. Excellent writing, Regis.
Take care,
Sherry
The tremendous humility and sublime grace expressed in this poem give it a great deal of power. An inspiring flight from the slopes of the psychologically oppressive into the heights of the spiritually liberating.
To know and experience this reality in the seat of our hearts - our mind, will and emotions - is freedom indeed, and this liberation from years of an otherwise captivity is something you just can't imagine until you finally experience it for yourself. We can be bound even by that which we are consciously unaware of. You speak of mystical and hidden depths of truth here, Regis, and the picture vocalises your meaning wonderfully. We truly do underestimate the power and beauty of both the giving and receiving of forgiveness. A much-needed and well-executed write, as always. TY for this. LOL Kate xx
amazing, really, how the power lies with us to disentangle ourselves and remain free... a lesson i have to learn over and over again it seems. this was really excellent, Regis.
Forgiveness is freedom, but never more so than for the one who does the forgiving. Unforgiveness is like a cancer...eating away at everything good in life. This is a powerful, beautiful write Regis. Michelle
Splendid Regis!If only more people realized how freeing this act is
they would never hold back. But then, pride is a very strong trait!
Beautifully written! Thanks for sharing!
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forgiving = sometimes mostly hard for me to do, - do try though, but sometimes, just need to overlook and go on without reservations.
It is timeless, filled with honesty! Thanks for sharing!
Much Love,
Margaret
Love it & you, dear friend,
Sandy
So true, it is very liberating to forgive it sets the soul free to soar again.
Nicole
The unforgiving in ones soul will darken and erode the heart.
Wonderful write!!! CarolHawks
The line "Naked I am" is deeply meaningful in this work. Those words capture volumes. The opening imagery is beautiful and sets the mood; a perfect metaphor. Well done! Love and Hugs:)
Sheila
My best regars,
Chris
blessings,
Jolen
Brilliant poem Regis. I am in awe of your writing. I have read so much of it but am making time to let you know what I really think of it.
Love Chanti
Catherine
The insults, though, are confusing my interpretation a bit. To whom does that refer? Or is it "your accusations"? Please, let me know so I can understand the poem better.
Amour et paix
Mahdi
Peace
Paul.
This is a very insightful poem. When human beings learn to shake off the "mea culpa" that imprisons us then we start to have a hope of fixing this sorry mess we are in.
best
Ian
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TRASK
Reindeer
A truly uplifting, resounding, most exceptional write my friend ... perfection!!
Best regards,
Robert
Thank you!
Safi
"Absolution"
A brilliant and inspiring write.
Wonderful,seemingly confessional poem
to share.
Continued success Regis,
Gwendolyn
A profoundly, insightful write.
Blue skies and sunshine.
can you accept forgive~ness? is a question as well for yourself
humble bare this piece gives it all
Excellent!!!
fellow poet, brother, that's all God wants of us, to approach His throne of Grace with humility and honesty. a most beautiful, respectful prayer, filled with deep wisdom. well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D
paix et amour a toi! :)
Peace, Carole
Take care,
Sherry
Wonderful work, Regis!
Sandie May Angel :o)
Reg.
Much Love Tinka
Thank God almighty, I'm free at last
A Fantastic write ...Regis
William ......Peace & Love
Best,
Carolyn
I like the verse, Yes prayed with fire, very powerful
Love and peace
Huda
thank you for reminding us...
they would never hold back. But then, pride is a very strong trait!
Beautifully written! Thanks for sharing!
Love, Eileen