Rhyming acrostics are difficult for me and I do find them often a little "forced." Still I enjoy the challenge. Photo (by me) of daffodils of my lawn.
Easter - Time For Peace(rhyming acrostic)
Early dawn and the stillness Awakens within a brightness Silence is deceptive The Earth is receptive Every soul yearns for healing Reeling from eons of ill feeling
The time is now for peace It is time for wars to cease May we at last become as one Every being become golden
For far too long the Earth has bled Over millennia peace has fled Reject old ways and pave the way
Put all your enmities away Embrace the possibilities Accept the bounty of beauties Creation has so long offered Eternity has now proffered
Wow Regis this is absolutely beautiful
And the message withing is a wonderful gift
Easter is a day to rejoice and pray for Peace
I hope you had a wonderful Easter in company of Family
Brilliant I wish i could learn this style
I truly love rhyming in this piece!!
Brilliant!
Wishing you Peace Love and Light..Yolie
Regis, there is nothing forced about this gem! On the contrary it is free flowing,and inspired. A beauty to be treasured. Thanks for sharing...
Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Ruth Gonzales (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2010
Thank you so much for such a message, So powerful and beautiful filled with love, we need this in this times of war, crime and filth in the world. A breakthrough in times of need and all..
Loved this one so much... It is about love and peace that we strive for. Blessings...
A powerful (Rhyming Acrostic) "Easter-Time For Peace" and the beauty of your gift really shines very brightly in this one Regis! Thank you so much for sharing and having such a caring heart!
May the Lord bless you in a special way and be always gracious to you and your family!
This acrostic seems like a hard one to write, and I wonder if it was the case for you. The rhyme is not perfect everywhere, which is fine, but at times it does seem forced to me, as if you were just trying to rhyme for the sake of rhyme. This also makes the flow not always smooth for me. There is definitely something to ponder about from the content. I still liked the poem but I wish the flow was smooth throughout the whole piece. It's like you don't have a flow structure, or a pattern to the flow ... and that seems to be part of the problem.
Regis, truly you excel at these - for you it seems to be the case that the more difficult and elongated the acrostic, the better. And rhyming, too! You seem to thrive within strict poetic confines and to bring forth such seemingly effortless beauty. Peace, love and Easter joy to you always. xx
Indeed it is time for peace, Regis....we've wasted so many centuries on senseless brutality...I truly wish we could ALL embrace the beauty that surrounds us..well done!
This is a nice sentiment. Maybe someday people will all wake up at once and realize that life truly is short, and that we can all have some joy from it if we work at that happiness together. After all, what other reason is there for living other than trying to find and give happiness?
Bright blessings to you and yours, Regis,
Jim
Regis, Just a beautiful poem! You do very well with the acrostics. You have challenged me to write again. I have missed it so. You did a wonderful job here! Love ya!
Becca
AMEN! THE PURE, WONDERFUL, SOUL SAVING MESSAGE OF EASTER IN A WELL DONE ACROSTIC. THANKS FOR SHARING AND HAPPY EASTER TO YOU! LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Regis, your thoughts are noble and certainly Easter is a perfect time for peace to break out around the world in a pandemic of love --Happy Easter and may peace and love be with you -- Jon Michael
Woundrous thoughts for this Easter holiday, Reg! Prayers for Peace seem to be an ongoing plea for centuries...let them be heard in our lifetime.
Blessings and Love to you, friend - Micke
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hug
Kathy
Brilliant write as always.
Amour et paix,
Nicole
And the message withing is a wonderful gift
Easter is a day to rejoice and pray for Peace
I hope you had a wonderful Easter in company of Family
Brilliant I wish i could learn this style
I truly love rhyming in this piece!!
Brilliant!
Wishing you Peace Love and Light..Yolie
Blessings & Peace, Holly
Love,
Eileen
Loved this one so much... It is about love and peace that we strive for. Blessings...
May the Lord bless you in a special way and be always gracious to you and your family!
Much Love,
Margaret
I thank you for embracing my heart
always through the love of your heart
Love's Bouquet...Vickie
Lena
Sheila
Anna
(((HUGS))) et amour, ton ami dans Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
Bright blessings to you and yours, Regis,
Jim
Daniel
Love and blessings,
ann
Becca
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Blessings, Carole~
Blessings and Love to you, friend - Micke
Cheers and Happy Easter,
Dan
Ron
Happy Easter! Regis
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony
Georg
Susan
Great resolutions for a full-of good-deeds year. --Charlie
It is time for wars to cease. Amen mon cher is excellente. Love Emile
Mary
God Bless you and Happy easter!
John Michael Domino
Sandie Angel :o)
Peace,
Sage