Walking on a shoreline
Or in a meadow green
Be it in the sunshine or the rain
We leave a trail of memories
To mingle with our dreams
To close our eyes and look upon again
If I should see a falling star
Streak across the sky
I’d make a wish and wish it would come true
I’d wish though out my life
To have a special kind of friend
And I would wish that special friend is you
Our lives would truly mean nothing without the love and support of our friends. Amazing write, Jack. Sorry I've been away so long. I've missed everyone so much!!!
Take care.
Jill
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2004
Jack so wonderful and meaningful is this write!!!! Friends really are an important part of each of our lives!
Jack this is a splendid poem!
Your sentiments are superb! Always
a joy to read your lilting work!
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2004
Jack I am glad to see you express this mood for a friend. Your sense of kindness and love help me wake up from a bad dream. Getting up on the wrong side of the bed doesn't become me. Your friend Bill
Beautiful and lyrical thoughts expressed here, Jack! I love the idea of mingling our memories with our dreams and being able to "look upon them" again... that's what makes them so special, I suppose... particularly when they are woven around the association of a loving friendship. Delicately expressed, Jack, thank you. Kate
Jack!
For you I would hold the first star visible in the darkest sky captive so that you could have your wish, a poet that can pen something this touching and delightful would deserve no less......I am saving this.....its stellar! lol
pax........Anita
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Take care.
Jill
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True friends are precious!!
Love Tinka
Your sentiments are superb! Always
a joy to read your lilting work!
For you I would hold the first star visible in the darkest sky captive so that you could have your wish, a poet that can pen something this touching and delightful would deserve no less......I am saving this.....its stellar! lol
pax........Anita
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