Angel!
Your materializing form emerges from an iridescent glow
You tower far above me while I cower here below
In dreaded terror, I stare and quiver as I behold you
adorned in tinted garments of lavender, cream and blue
Your voice is clear and musical, like a commanding etude
I gape in fascination, breathless, helpless and subdued
Angel!
Your overwhelming presence has entranced me
Your startling questions have unnerved me
They are engraved upon my mind, forever imprinted
there throughout the tides of time
Yes, I hear your melodic, sweet song of query
I struggle ecstatically, mesmerized with its harmony
For it is wondrous music, utterly sublime
I understand you clearly, yet am I speechless
No words with which to answer can I find
Angel!
In breathless stupor I shake in wondrous ecstasy
My soul stirs deep within as I repeat your decree
Dare I accept the challenge of this awesome quest?
My heart beats erratically within my heaving breast
I summon all my courage, from the very depths of me
Finally, I whimper softly, a reply to the inquiry
You may relay my answers to the heavens
I pray that I shall be blessed
Angel! I call gingerly, declaring my answers to the quest
Angel! I whisper softly, The answers are Yes! And yes! And yes!
I just came upon this angel yes poem today and did find some joy out of reading it. It is different and I could never write like you do, but I enjoyed it today and it did give me much joy in reading it. Glad I found it today. It is a cold 42 Deg day and very windy here.
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
An excellent, well written poem that comes alive when reading, well done, very well done...take care Mark ...
Gwen.. this is bountiful in beauty and splendour.. wonder where you got an insipration for such a verse.. pure HEAVENLY!
And your picture is awesome!
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2003
Your talent is extraordinary..remarkable..!!! I am pleased to see so many on this site have awakened..so many are aware of who they are..
Namaste...
Vesna
Hi, Gwen! It's nice (finally!) to be able able to visit your DEN (that rhymes!)...
Anyway, THIS is a beautifully imagined and imaged blank verse poem. I should like to see more of your work, with a view to possibly publishing it in our journal,
POETRY IN EMOTION.
Should you be interested, please send me an e-mail, along with a max of 10 poems, to:
vallance22.coolgoose.com
Please note, others who post comments on Gwen's DEN, I do NOT accept unsolicited manuscripts.
Great art and artistry in the words and image. It reminds me of the words of the father in 'A Room with a View', who wanted his son to realise beside the eternal question mark there was a Yes, and a Yes, and a Yes!
(Leaves you just dying to know what those questions were... :-)
Regards
DJ.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
I'm awed! Breathtaking beauty!
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
Gwen ... a very beautiful poem and the picture selection was excellent. In the end it came down to Yes, Yes, Yes. Well after all the splendor you encountered, what else could it be but yes! Your friend Bill
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2003
{{{Gwen}}}
Oooooo this is filled with such splendor that beckons, calls to the heart and soul. I am ever so glad that I did not miss this FANTASTIC PIECE!!!!
~Nikki~
some would praise your imagination and its ability to fabricate such an episode. I would rather laud what I expect was a true and metaphysical experience. I have encountered angels, and your description, especially of the musical voice and your awe at their authority makes me suspect an actual encounter whether in a vision or in a dream. Of course, such a foolish perception as I proffer should only be uttered in sotto voice.
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And your picture is awesome!
Namaste...
Vesna
Excellent ...Gwen
William
Anyway, THIS is a beautifully imagined and imaged blank verse poem. I should like to see more of your work, with a view to possibly publishing it in our journal,
POETRY IN EMOTION.
Should you be interested, please send me an e-mail, along with a max of 10 poems, to:
vallance22.coolgoose.com
Please note, others who post comments on Gwen's DEN, I do NOT accept unsolicited manuscripts.
Thanks,
Richard Vallance,
CANADA
(Leaves you just dying to know what those questions were... :-)
Regards
DJ.
Oooooo this is filled with such splendor that beckons, calls to the heart and soul. I am ever so glad that I did not miss this FANTASTIC PIECE!!!!
~Nikki~
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Awesome!
Love from India - Joel -
Reindeer
Dee
this speaks to me with painted soul imagery that is powerful..
Peace and love,
Dove