Sometimes we walk in dark, poorly lit areas, the like of which have tall buildings all around. As we walk our footsteps echo, not once but several times, here and there.
You kept the suspense going nicely until the nice little letdown twist at the end. Enjoyably spooky.
I think anyone would feel a bit paranoid in a place like that. Especially if it were devoid of other people and imaginary footsteps were heard but not seen.
Hah! A person can't help buy get a bit paranoid in places such as that. Even after my two lost decades where I was a street guy completely and fear nothing, I believe I would get nervous in certain darkened surroundings.
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I think anyone would feel a bit paranoid in a place like that. Especially if it were devoid of other people and imaginary footsteps were heard but not seen.
Cool stuff.
Ron