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THAT DISTURBING PLACE.
by John W Townsend → (All Poetry by John W Townsend)
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Sometimes we walk in dark, poorly lit areas, the like of which have tall buildings all around. As we walk our footsteps echo, not once but several times, here and there.


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In a hurry

as evening falls

take a short cut

through the city sidewalks,

shops all closing

except 24-7

its empty

how does he make a living.

Turn a corner

unfriendly place

crushed drinks cans

litter the gutter,

look around

thought I heard someone

makes you nervous

when on your own.

Pat my pockets

ensure all is intact

wallet my phone

my keys all here,

still feel someone

behind me somewhere

quickly look around

no one there.

Hurry my pace

to get out of this place

before paranoia

makes me disgrace myself,

never felt so ill at ease

whats with this sidewalk

where no one

keeps following me.

Relief as I see

the end of the street

I walk much faster

so do those other feet,

like a fool

all hot and bothered

get out of that place

as fast as I could,

yet as I do

I look back uncertain

the mind playing tricks

wants to peer behind curtains

change my mind quick,

there's my bus

I make a dash

but still I still look back

at the disturbing place,

as I look

the bus pulls away

sure I saw a man waving at me

from the dark alley.

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "THAT DISTURBING PLACE."
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 15, 2014
You kept the suspense going nicely until the nice little letdown twist at the end. Enjoyably spooky.

I think anyone would feel a bit paranoid in a place like that. Especially if it were devoid of other people and imaginary footsteps were heard but not seen.

Cool stuff.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on September 15, 2014
Hah! A person can't help buy get a bit paranoid in places such as that. Even after my two lost decades where I was a street guy completely and fear nothing, I believe I would get nervous in certain darkened surroundings.


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