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Subliminal Bears
by Kathy Kopp → (All Poetry by Kathy Kopp)
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This poem is meant to capture that feeling just before you fall asleep. While driving along a wild Montana road, the rocks in the Lochsa River looked like bears. That night I stayed in the "bear" cabin at a lodge in Lewiston.

The rock swims upstream
its granite roots hanging tight to the  riverbed
not wanting to float away.


A black bear holds onto the rock
too scared to let go.
Boulder and bear swim as one
inching along to that place like a den
where both can hide
far away as Lewiston.


That night in the bear cabin
when I count bears
they merge in and out
of the four log walls


Mini-bears tumble in the air
not flying, suspended
I count two hundred eight
biting their paws, each other
giggling in growly voices


One bear in a green tux lingers
the others faded.


Is this a teddy bear
on my rustic pillow?
too cute for the tourist
but not for me.


When he opens his paws for a hug,
I squeeze his fur
to take away my fear of nightfall.



See-through grizzlies glide
somewhere in my head     
©Kathy Kopp 2005


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 Reviews of "Subliminal Bears"
Reviewed by Carol Rzadkiewicz
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
I love your use of imagery and also how you achieve a sense of rhythm, without using actual rhyme, that allows each word and each image to flow smoothly from the reader's tongue. Great work.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
i would think these thoughts capture the imagination as it begins to dream rather than just before falling to sleep ... either way, found them quite intriguing ...

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
Love your imagination, Kathy. Excellent work.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 13, 2008
"One bear in a green tux lingers"

I want what you're smokin'...;) ed


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