Sorry I don't get to visit the Den more. I must apologize for my hectic schedule. It is close to impossible to catch up on all your posts. There are so many excellent writers here that to overlook anyone is to overlook everyone. Sooner or later you'll here from me and again I apologize if I haven't replied to any of you in awhile.
How can a man who stands as one, believe and trust in anyone? Life within has vowed to cease, Passion waits for its release.
These feelings harbored deep inside, with every tenderness implied. Solemnity need not be true , And savour ; But its worth of you.
My love ; Alas - It shall not fray, its measure sees me through each day. A perfect gift in honesty, to share this heart so willingly.
When we meet in lovers dream, truth will hold each fragile seam. Eternity shall pass for me, until our time is meant to be.
This is another lovely poem, Paul. Your soft and flowing rhyme and meter meld so well, allowing your reader to feel your words. Excellent work.
Love,
CJ
I do so like this one of your. I find a lot of "feeling" inside me when reading a lot of your poems,but this one says something "just for me"
Thank you, I hope one day when Im not a "beginner" anymore,Ill be able to reach out to people in this remarkable way
Please give us more!
An autumn wish From Rita from over the atlantic
Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2005
beautiful and yes, inspiring
well done
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2005
Inspiring Paul...you have the gift of rhyme...few can rhyme this well!
Paul, it is no matter that you are not here often...I too live a very hectic life. What matters is that when you are here you give us pearls such as this to read. You have royal poets blood running through those veins, Paul. I will be back to read more. I loved this piece and savoured the flavour of each and every word. Excellent write!
No matter, Paul: we can always wait for gems like this one! Please don't apologise, for I am sure there is no need as everyone understands the pressures we probably operate under. And when you reappear with offerings like this, then all is forgiven!!! :))) Tender, vulnerable, lucid, passionate and yet controlled. This one shines!! TY Kate xx
I am as you Paul...too busy with newspapering and attending to others' in the family who live far away. I miss this place . My creativity lacks when I don't come here and my life seems bland but work and family is important too. I will return soon.
I like this poem for it's honesty.
Susan
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Love,
CJ
Thank you, I hope one day when Im not a "beginner" anymore,Ill be able to reach out to people in this remarkable way
Please give us more!
An autumn wish From Rita from over the atlantic
well done
You have to know......I LOVE IT.
ty, Dani
Cheers!
Deborah :o))
I like this poem for it's honesty.
Susan
This is soooo good. I really like the romantic passion in this one. You have done this one so well. Lovely write indeed!
Sandie May Angel :o)
I love this last verse:
"When we meet in lovers dream,
truth will hold each fragile seam.
Eternity shall pass for me,
until our time is meant to be."
Erin
Exquisite poetry, thank you for sharing.
Love, Eileen
Take your time my friend...and thanks for sharing!!
Love Tinka
i love romantic writeWhen we meet in lovers dream,
truth will hold each fragile seam.
Eternity shall pass for me,
until our time is meant to be
APPLAUSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!