What Could Have Been (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 12, 2008

This is so gently written, and although sad, a beautiful write.

Reviewed on December 27, 2007

Paul,

Very haunting! I think we may each hold scenarios like this from our past. Imagery is fantastic and symbolic. Great work!

Sheila

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

So beautifully worded and expressed! This tender and gentle write, touched my heart and misted my eyes! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Theresa curnow (Reader)

Reviewed on April 29, 2007

Another fine poem from you Paul. I haven't been here that long but I look forward to your poems because they are so charming. Theresa.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on April 4, 2007

Such a beautiful tender poem, love holly

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on April 3, 2007

cool poeming Paul, most uniqely

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

This one is so gentle and tender in imagery and expressions the ending sad but so beautiful....

Excellent Paul

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

WOW this are very intense and heartfelt
Emotions softly written and felt
Each fallen tear the imagery and flow
The tone your words capture
The picture of what could have been a
Romance that pass!!
Excellent poetic view of thoughts!!
Love And Peace To You Always..Morning Star

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

Awe, what a sad and heartfelt write my friend, sure makes one stop and think...very moving and compassionate...enjoyed this much!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

This is a poetic bouquet of orchids... "What Could Have Been" is a ~ romantic sublime ~ composition to honor The American Fine Letters.

In gratitude and appreciation,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 30, 2007

You always have such a lovely rhythm to your rhymes Paul! Beautifully expressed!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on March 30, 2007

An intimate look into the heart of a love ,lost. Well done, Paul!...M

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on March 30, 2007

In the tenderest gesture, I know these words.

Thank you!
Susan

Reviewed by Jerelyn Craden

Reviewed on March 30, 2007

Ah, HE is the twelfth rose. Lovely. Jerelyn