I like this, Paul.... there is an impression of the wayfarer always seeking that extra bit of mystery beyond the horizon, hinted at by the words "visions yet unseen", while "that bitter peace" suggests that he half wants to settle down, yet half dreads it. Or perhaps "that bitter peace" means death... either way, an intriguing poem.... Sara.
Sepsis knocked her down and out. Faith, hope, and gave her the strength to get back on her feet. I am a Runner She fought the river of death They said she'd never run again
She proved them wrong...
After a long awaited weekend visitation caused by false allegations of sexual abuse, Glen got to see his children for the first time in over two months. He promised them that they would never be apart again and then they disappeared.
You are so talented. This piece inspires, and I love the easy flow of your words. Exceptional imagery here. Keep writing and I'll keep reading!
Sheila
This is fantasic. Keep up the great work.
Jill
Chrissie
At times I feel I'm walking
in quicksand..every step a
struggle and in slow motion.
Excellent!!!
This is so excellent.
You make it so surreal
peg