Commitment (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

A very tender write, Paul. Thank you for sharing this! Love and Hugs~
Sheila

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 9, 2003

sad in a way!!!

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on April 5, 2003

A wonderful, touching write.

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on April 4, 2003

Hi Paul,
I remember my fist
puppy love...
Nothing like my first
true love... :)

Trixie

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 4, 2003

ah...First love,..will never fade or forget...How beautiful this was,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on April 4, 2003

silly girl
josie

Reviewed by Leysa Lowery

Reviewed on April 4, 2003

I remember my first love, too. I didn't ask for commitment, just the exclusivity he required of me. Ah, but I loved him so, as you said, many moons ago. Thank you for reminding me of him with your poem!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on April 4, 2003

commitment - if she wanted more than your heart -she was more like possessive....*smile*

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on April 4, 2003

Paul,
I remember my first love too, and this made me smile, he did not want to commit either,or maybe it was me who wouldn't! <smiles> Now I am glad we didn't! lol! Funny how that happens! I agree with LaBelle, you are a romantic!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 4, 2003

Beautiful write Paul... with some there is never enough of anything...you did right;-)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 4, 2003

Sounds very high maintenence...lucky you moved on...you'd still be giving and nothing coming back. [smiles] well done.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 4, 2003

You never forget that first one...excellent writing Paul.
Chrissie

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on April 4, 2003

Don't you just adore love though Paul? It is divine....and so are your words...Ty, Dani