This is a powerful and thought provoking poem. With so many differences in the world, there will probably always be brave soldiers dying for one cause or another. Love the effect of the last line! Great work:) Sheila
One thing about living...we all will be held accountable of how we lived. This is a wonderful, insightful verse.
Love and peace,
Susan
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
Goodmorning Paul,
This is very truthful and well done.
"Life is precious and a
given right. The power to
desecrate creation must not exist.
Our actions shall be accountable. "
Peg
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
Bleeding words Paul...straight from within...your writing is superb...Ty, Dani
(Richard M. Feldman) Ever since I was a young boy, the only thing I wanted to be was a cowboy. I wanted to own and work on a real ranch, with cattle and horses. Especially horses.
While I never became a cowboy, considering everything I have done
This is a powerful and thought provoking poem. With so many differences in the world, there will probably always be brave soldiers dying for one cause or another. Love the effect of the last line! Great work:) Sheila
Amen, this is the truth! Great write Paul!
Hugs,
Maria
Reindeer
Love and peace,
Susan
This is very truthful and well done.
"Life is precious and a
given right. The power to
desecrate creation must not exist.
Our actions shall be accountable. "
Peg
You say so much in this excellent and profound poem.
Chrissie
Your words speaks volumes.
A needed write!
Peace,
Lorrieann
A fine write especially for so early in the day. Your a great writer, Paul.
yf
tony