Preferences (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

It takes a lot of talent to get words to rhyme beautifully. I'm glad you decided to embrace your first love, Paul! Great poem. Your frustration doesn't come across as much as your love for rhyme does. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

Hey, I liked this one so much! Ha, I don't try to rhyme, either it does, or it doesn't..

Excellent,

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

Paul many would kill to have your rhythm and rhyme, so keep it going please, we love it!

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

Hi Paul,
Well dear friend,
You did well....:)

Trixie

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

I really like this Paul

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

yipeee..........you know what you ought to do? combine both your loves together....
Great write, loved it

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

Very ceative indeed
Ain't that sweet
To get such a tread
with sunflower and wheat
Nice slice of bread

lololol treat

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

I wish I could rhyme I never been able to so great jobon the rhyming now can u teach me how to? PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

You have such a gift for rhyme...go for it. The beauty of free verse is the rhythm and choice of the words.

Reviewed by Leysa Robertson

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

*Smiles*
Great message in wonderful phrasing!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

Perfect rhyme and flow Paul.
I also love rhyme, strict or very subtle and I like to play around with different rhythms. But sometimes what I want to say has to run free You do both extremely well.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

Excellent rhyming, my friend...
I had always thought I HAD to
rhyme, but some of mine are
free verse, and I find it much
easier. I do rhyme more often
than not because it too is my
first love :)

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

I admit to not being a poet, and I knowit. I write what is in my minds eye or imagination. You do the same.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

Keep rhyming Paul. Thanks for the laugh on heads will roll. I really like this poem.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

Paul,
I love it when your frustrated this is so good and I loved the rhyme. I cannot rhyme so I have been told but I love free verse mixed with the ryhme a tast devine from both worlds, I loved this one.
Peggy

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

Great write, don't give up, at first I could only write in rhyme but now enjoy free verse as well, funny how some of our minds tend to run in rhyme!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

Rhyme is my frustration in poetry and its wonderful to me when I can read poems with it. You have done excellent writing in this one. Maybe if I keep reading your work I will learn :-)

Reviewed by Shezray Faisal

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

GREAT write :)
~Shezz

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

Hi Paul......you know I love to rhyme ;)....tho...I do enjoy the odd bit of free verse. Rhyme runs through these veins though....I swear I rhyme in my sleep. Enjoyed this write.....Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

Hi Paul:

Excellent work! Great rhyme indeed!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

Good Morning, Paul
I like to rhyme. I think your rhming was great.

namaste
tony