Doomed (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on February 17, 2004

Heavy and sad. Hope these words don't express your current feelings.
:)Sandy

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

Verse, after verse, after verse of meaningful symbolism - enjoyed!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 7, 2004

This certainly awakens the thought processes. Thank you for this offering, Paul. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

This is so good. Love the images!

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

Hello Paul, this was a very interesting poetic piece, enjoyed the read. G

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

Powerfully written, and so moving, deeply touched me this morning,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on February 5, 2004

This touched me to the core, Paul. (So good to read you again.) Well penned. Thank you.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

"Doomed" delivers a sage message and instructs with art and wisdom.

Long Healthy Life, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

Powerful and emotive write..enjoyed this best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

Stunning, powerful piece! So good to read you again. Thank you for commenting on my piece, I'm a bit rusty...life's been busy!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on February 3, 2004

certainly a winner

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 3, 2004

powerful imagery!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 3, 2004

Paul this is a stunner! Exceptional write gave me shivers. Beautifully crafted!

Reviewed by Leysa Lowery

Reviewed on February 3, 2004

Felt this all through me. excellent

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 3, 2004

A moving write from you kind sir. Thanks for your review

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Paul...exceptional write from you...this is outstanding write....a gem...love n luck....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

'Beats continue, though aches remain.
Pain envelops the lives they surround.
Fields of tranquility can never exist,
for their souls are pledged to each other.'

Oh Paul, this is a brilliant portrayal of the congealing illness of so many!

Well done!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Let us hope not. Doomed I mean.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Paul,

This is so powerful "

Beats continue, though aches remain.

Pain envelops the lives they surround.

Fields of tranquility can never exist,

for their souls are pledged to each other."
Missed you here...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Powerful touching write Paul!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

GREAt write, Paul!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Paul, very structured thought out lines. Every word seemed as though it was placed to balance the rest. Excellent. Lisa

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Wonderful emotive poem, Paul...a really stunning opening verse
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Dan Summerfield (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Excellent!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Paul this was such a heart touching poem...very meaningful and full of insight...lovely work...floria

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Paul, this is the most inspirationally potent poem
that I have read of yours, I think.
Keep the force pulsing!

Reviewed by Sharon Palmer

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Superb Symbolism! Keep writing wonderful pieces like this one; if anyone can help me shake my writer's block, you can! (Gotta keep up with that Berube guy!! *grin* )

Seriously, I really like it. I get the impression that you are much more disciplined in exercising your writing chops than I am! MUCH more disciplined!!

Keep it up -- it's working for you, wonderfully!!

;-}

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Paul, very unique and thought provoking and emotive.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Powerful write, Paul.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

Great write and heart touching.