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Red Lips Dangling

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Wednesday, September 1, 2004


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She took her lips, and rouged them red,
Slightly spread, and smiling.
Blew them a kiss, those red, red lips,
And hung them on dark ruby’s thread
She wore adorned about her ankle.
The cord was tied, a dulling black,
Wrapped thrice round bones; with
Small silver phial holding red-life gems;
Dangling her heart -- in forms of ruby stones.
Her moonchild mind moon-bathed in time,
Her Crab an astrological steed entwined,
Red-shelled and brittle-laughtered,
With the constellations of her future.

She looked at lips, and looked at gems,
And, felt a premonition -- of red impassioned.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
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© Copyright 9/1/04
   


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Reviewed on September 4, 2004
Ruby Lips - Dangling, but certainly NOT like participles !!!

Enjoyable RED READ ! Tom.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on September 2, 2004
like your unexpected end and this line was beautiful:
Her moonchild mind moon-bathed in time,
excellent!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on September 2, 2004
She looked at lips, and looked at gems,
and felt a premonition -- of red impassioned.

Erin...classic write my friend and a fitting picture to go with this splendid write...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN.

Reviewed on September 2, 2004
"Red Lips Dangling" shows the findings of heedful observation of the eyes guided by an active mind and creative soul – learning the language of Nature to speak with the feet, – leaving prints on the poetic land.

I salute You, Sublime Artist of the VERB!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 2, 2004
this is charming!
no pun intended.
:)

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 2, 2004
That's what I call letting it all hang out Erin....Lol
Very cool write...
Peter

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on September 2, 2004
Thanks to Elga, I've changed the ending of this piece, and feel it fits the tone/mood of smiles and silver phials much better.

You're a sweetie, Elga, thanks! :)

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on September 2, 2004
Dear Erin "Moongem"

Beautiful imagery and a true gem of a write, but why a premonition of red disaster ? why not red passion, it should be so !

warm hugs
Elga ~Indigo


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