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Creation A fleeting thought. A Heavenly light beam, A vaporous notion The mind receives. Words not yet spoken, A fleeting thought Has broken And crystallized a seed. From God To mind, To heart, To mouth. A fleeting thought Descends As divine revelation A virgin conception. Gnarled only By human transgressions, Ambition, desires, Interpretation. A fleeting thought. Open arms, a smile, a kiss, Man, woman, marriage, A birth. A fleeting thought. Sublime inspiration, Molded by our transgressions, Desires, interpretations. A fleeting thought Is arms that love, Hands that kill, A fleeting thought, Transforms to love, Hate, peace, war, Kindness, greed, Life, death, Silence, And then, A fleeting thought.... Carmen Ruggero .2003 This poem has been in my mind for over a week, and it just wouldn�t move, not an inch in any direction. I knew what I wanted to say, but the words just weren�t there. But tonight I read a piece by our wonderful and insightful poet, Eileen T. Waldron, titled �The Sword That Writes�. I left comments for Eileen; something to indicate I needed to hear those words. And indeed I did, because it so inspired me that about an hour later, I finished my poem. The words came to me as if they were being dictated. Thank you Eileen, for your work, and the inspiration you so freely share; thank you, from the bottom of my heart. -- Carmen

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Again, amazing writing!
You are such a fine poet.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on September 28, 2003

"Creation" is whispering the words that Eternal Mother is always sharing while creating.

Great conception of Eternity Now.

Superb WRITING.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on September 27, 2003

Carmen, this is an amazing poem! Beautiful, just beautiful...~Z~

Reviewed by RD Larson

awe-inspiring and so evocative of creation itself.

Reviewed by jude forese

excellent counterpointal meter and inspiring imagery...

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Thank you for the welcome and this is so inspirational and uplifting thank you.
Taylor

Reviewed by E T Waldron

I'm honored! This poem is so superbly expressed,Your poetry always enlightens! Part of the greatness of poetry is that we can inspire one another, you have returned the favor with this write;-)Thank you!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

lovely write, carmen; great job! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Very well written thought!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

My first thought - Beautiful!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Your fleeting thoughts have spun into a gem of a poem. The gift of sharing thoughts between poets is a treasure for the world to read. Thank you for this wonderful sharing.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Carmen, It's always a sense of relief when finally the words are fed to us. Glad to know that you can now digest your thoughts. This was truly inspiring as was Eileen's. Lisa