drifting down the stream
coz i plum run out of steam
drifting through summer days
in a steamy summer haze
wondering where the hell i've been
having avoided all occasions of sin
missed all those "occasions of sin" eh, John? May I suggest you paddle back downstream a ways? There's bound to be something fascinating along the way. (grin)
May I just say, this tickled me from word one to that final, hilarious DAMN! Thanks for showing us your mucho cool funny bone... now get paddlin'!! hehe.. katy xox.
Ha ha,great little poem John,this one rolls of the tongue beautifully,a lovely relaxing read.Where have you been John,avoiding all sin?Too hot to be heaven,not hot enough to be hell,yep,sounds like it's just summer in the northern hemisphere without airconditioning.Our spring is about to start,winter finishes on tuesday,we are in for hell this coming summer as already it is hot here during days,today in post office woman was using a paper fan
and everyone was complaining of heat.I am 'plum run out of steam 'too John,'damn' says it perfectly.'Damn!"
Anyway....this poem was really cool!
Best wishes
from
kay.
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May I just say, this tickled me from word one to that final, hilarious DAMN! Thanks for showing us your mucho cool funny bone... now get paddlin'!! hehe.. katy xox.
Interesting, more to this than meets the eye.
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Like this one, John!
and everyone was complaining of heat.I am 'plum run out of steam 'too John,'damn' says it perfectly.'Damn!"
Anyway....this poem was really cool!
Best wishes
from
kay.