I
had no intention of this
when we met
by chance
last night
no desire for today
except
to reconnect
at lunch.
But
lunch lead to a long walk
which
lead to drinks in your hotel room
then
I went to leave
a friendly kiss
became an invitation:
You asked,
I begged.
We agreed
That was hours ago...
Now
your probing fingers
have aroused me yet again.
You smile
as you slide onto me
beginning
another long journey
to
nowhere
●
●
●
The sum of lust falls squarely on that destination of "nowhere". Extremely well done.
Amor
Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
I loved this poem when I read the last word: 'nowhere'. This comes as a total surprise - a bathos .. A very smart interesting twist that lent a lot of depth to the poem, that could otherwise be described as erotic.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
John,
excelelnt raw emotion
and gentlness
very well done.
Peggy
Jim...This is excellent write from you yet again...clap clap clap...love n luck...BHUWAN
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
My god, but you've captured reality, the harshness of where these things go, but with such compassion, such softness.. One complete lifetime in just a few hours.. nothing crude, simply real. Beautiful and sad. katy.
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that's the right word!) Time to travel....
Did you really?????
Do THAT!!!
hehehehe.....
I thought that was for red head ans bold heads,,,,,,,,hehehehe!!!
Love
Tinka
real, honest, powerful...well done
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Amor
excelelnt raw emotion
and gentlness
very well done.
Peggy
You smile
as you slide onto me
beginning
another long journey
to
nowhere
Love the ending.