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o, dear -- [erotic]
by john k zimmerman → (All Poetry by john k zimmerman)
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I
am not sure
how we got
to this
point:

Lying in this rented bed,
naked

I
had no intention of this
when we met
by chance
last night
no desire for today
except
to reconnect
at lunch.

But
lunch lead to a long walk
which
lead to drinks in your hotel room
then
I went to leave
a friendly kiss
became an invitation:
You asked,
I begged.
We agreed
That was hours ago...

Now
your probing fingers
have aroused me yet again.
You smile
as you slide onto me
beginning
another long journey
to
nowhere
●
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 Reviews of "o, dear -- [erotic]"
Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
ah, the journeys we take to discover the self and the selflessness of coition (I think
that's the right word!) Time to travel....

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
nowhere is better than nothing...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
Its when you don't expect it that the fun begins :-) Great write.

Reviewed by a- maryllis
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
wow!...me like... good job :)

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
nothing like a bit of afternoon delight to titilate your fancy is there........

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
Now this is what you call reality poetry at it's best. This one is exceptional in tone and understated, hidden emotion.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
Whackadooooooo write John!!
Did you really?????
Do THAT!!!

hehehehe.....

I thought that was for red head ans bold heads,,,,,,,,hehehehe!!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed on June 11, 2003
(((john)))

real, honest, powerful...well done

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
The sum of lust falls squarely on that destination of "nowhere". Extremely well done.
Amor

Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
I loved this poem when I read the last word: 'nowhere'. This comes as a total surprise - a bathos .. A very smart interesting twist that lent a lot of depth to the poem, that could otherwise be described as erotic.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
John,
excelelnt raw emotion
and gentlness
very well done.
Peggy

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
Doesn't sound like nowhere to me! HOT! ~SH~

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
John, well done.

You smile
as you slide onto me
beginning
another long journey
to
nowhere

Love the ending.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
Jim...This is excellent write from you yet again...clap clap clap...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
My god, but you've captured reality, the harshness of where these things go, but with such compassion, such softness.. One complete lifetime in just a few hours.. nothing crude, simply real. Beautiful and sad. katy.


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