"Precious Friends"
Why Am I still trying
When I feel like I am dying
Why is it when I gain something
I lose so much more than I count for
Why does the sun shine
But stay dark within my heart
Why does the star still shine above
Even thou the moon are gone to sleep
Why do my tears still fall
When I feel numb…nothing at all
Why do my eyes shine
Knowing my heart is dying
Am I losing another precious friend
Why am I still trying
It’s because I love you
My precious friends!!
Copyright ©2004 Tinka Boukes
An exceptionally penned write - deep emotions surfaced ... thanks for sharing!!
Robert
Love
Peter
From what I have read of your poetry and the comments that you've received in your reviews, it seems that you have a lot of precious and true friends! You write with your whole heart and soul. I don't think you have to try that hard. Your friends shower you with love and they don't seem to be going anywhere! This is a great poem. Thanks for sharing it! The sun and the stars do shine ...Smile and enjoy them! :)
Cynthia
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D
Take heart dear one, life is strange and complex. Never allow others to upset or intimidate you, it's their biggest loss dear Tinks. Beautifully expressed poetry, straight from the big old heart of yours, keep smiling :) There is always a bright light ahead.
warm hugs and love
Elga
believe there is something like true frienship without the "Package" to go with it as some people may think.
And I know my friends know me better than that to judge me by "hearsay Look here" crap....but the public eye may think differently.
I love You and all my friends and readers who visit and read my words my heart my soul penned down...not someone elses!! Like the one posted and advertised on AD without my consent yet again!!
Warm Love Tinky
Chanti
Best wishes for many days with a happy heart.
Your friend always Ron
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true friends that is
William .....peace
do not feel the same about friendship as we do.WE have to
do better in learning to understand the limitaions of others.
Excellent poem Tinka!;-)
Then You Will Find A True Lover,i.e. Relationship!Credit Emtional Write!
TRASK
i understand this feeling comPLETEly. excellent questions that demand answers--BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
between them due to circumstance.......
maybe thats all this.......
give it time......
you never know.........
all the best to you.........pax A
Some friends are angels in disguise, I know I have a lot of these friends around me.
Sandie May Angel :o)