Dark Cloud Of Remembrance (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on January 11, 2007

Wow! Tink...So SAD and So Intense!
Definite keeper!
Hang In!
YOu will make it as you always do my friend~!
The sun is about to shine through YOU!
FEEL it comin'....
Look and feel
WArmest Blessings! and Thoughts! Illuminating WArrior Sheeeoxxo

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine

Reviewed on January 8, 2007

Emotional thunders, waves of emotion. intense, yet sad... hope will find you smiling for a better tomorrow.
Peace&Grace,
Sharon

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 8, 2007

I almost overcame the fear of tomorrow

I know you eventually will, Tinky, and I enjoyed listening to your poem. I also look forward to that happier write you speak of.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 8, 2007

Tinka,

I love your word usage in this poem. Hopefully the storm will pass and the sun will shine once more.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Powerful write, enjoyed hearing...poetry should be heard. Sad write, but one that is emotionally moving my friend...enjoyed much!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Awww Tinka, I hope those dark clouds are gone forever

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Gee Tinks, me winks, great poetic expression

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

"caught between the ocean
And the vision from afar
I came upon the contest of my heart"
These lines are stunning in their beauty, Tinka and standing alone set the tone of the entire poem. Poetic in the most pure and perfect way your poem is excellent. Nice to hear your voice, also.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Heartbreaking write, but done so very well; emotion and pain drips from your weeping pen! BRAVA, Tinka!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :(

You are in my prayers today!

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Expresses excellently the path of pain of unrequited love, a journey most hope they will not have to take. But those who do travel, have an added dimension to an already complex soul. Enjoyed your read which adds punch to the pain. R

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

A very touching poem Tinka, love Holly

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Life certainly happens to us while we're busy making other plans.
An intense reflective sojourn here.

Reviewed by H Cruz

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Nice; are we reliving the moment?

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

The contest we have with ourselves can be our biggest challenge.

Keep exploring--never know what will be under the next rock.

Ron

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

The consumate romantic with as well a beautiful voice, but whats the deal with that accent...;) e

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

The image and the verses complement one another most effectively, TinkaSweets. It is also a pleasure to hear your voice. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Poor Tinka. To live a lie is torture and sometimes there's nothing you can do about it. But hope reigns eternal. Someday we will all be happy. Victor

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Beautiful image Tinks - reminds me of Cytherea in the edifice of the gods.

Life may have crushed your heart sissy, and stole your soul, but these experiences have helped make you the loving, hopeful, and insightful writer, and human being that you are. Making sense of so much that makes no sense is one of your fortes as a writer.

A finely moving piece that is laced with the spirit of hope.

Love and Light ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

BEAUTIFUL RECITATION, TINKS!!!! Well done - brings the words and emotions alive... PLEASE do this more often! Poetry is MEANT to be heard. So powerful. We are -ish,-ish on the same page, kinda... A crucible write. LOL K xx

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

A haunting poem of love and disillusionment, Tinka. How well I relate ... this is sad, but so well done that I have to applaud you in baring your innermost feelings so perfectly in verse.
Love and a hug of understanding,
CJ

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

so sad, Tinka...and well written

Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Sweet and moving but achingly sad, I sure hope new desires will reawaken your heart and your smile in 2007.

Fee

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Sad emotions. Let it all out, Tinka!!!!!! Sometimes we need just to have that path of outlet to allow outselves to let ourselves out...

Love from your poet friend,
Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Introspection at its finest.

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Very moving,Tinka,
Sad emotions and memories haunt this poem,
Never wanting to go there again,
Thanks for sharing,Well done,
Gods Speed,
Michael