On The Wings Of A Sparrow (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 23, 2008

So true. But when there is sorrow and darkness, with the light a new dawn comes, sometimes so unexpectantly. Your poetry is awakening my friend. Greet it and share!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

It is those hours after midnight when the blues appear and sleep is illusive that sadness takes over...this lovely poem is filled with melancholy William...one day at a time, my friend
love and peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

That sad aftertaste is really lingering, William. It's a beautiful poem, sad but true!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

'I sent my sorrows on the wings of a sparrow so she may fly them away from me to the never arrival of tomorrow'...'Waiting for that tomorrow which never came.' BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE THIS SENTENCES!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

ah, that sparrow! Give her time and she will do her job. Meanwhile, springtime sunshine is just around the corner...go find it!
Your writing touches us!

a friend's hug,
Gina

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry

Reviewed on March 9, 2008

So somber and melancholy. Horrid days when we can't sleep and then the next day still ache to do so to "catch up" as it were, then it is yet another night and eve.

I hope you were talking about insomnia, which seems to grab us after 40.

Enjoyed, ~D.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 9, 2008

Beautifully written William, even though bittersweet, yet there is hope!;-)

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on March 9, 2008

As the sparrow sheds its feather to make space for a new one, so you must shed your sorrow...one feather at a time...or one poem at a time.
This expressive poem the beginning.

Contentment and Happiness on the morrow for you William.

Micke

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 9, 2008

I hope it arrives very soon, my friend.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 9, 2008

((((William))))

(((HUGS))) love and prayers - this one is sad - I pray happiness finds you soon.

Karla. :(

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on March 9, 2008

No more sorrows, William, embrace today and hold hope in your heart for tomorrow...there is always another tomorrow. I believe that things come to us when the time is right and often that seems to be when we have already given up on waiting for them to occur. I hope happiness knocks upon your door today and you do not hesitate to welcome it in. Beautiful poem.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 9, 2008

...and we are two...still waiting.

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 9, 2008

You sound sad, William; you are in my prayers! Beautiful write full of poingnancy! Very well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on March 9, 2008

i like this

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2008

Beautiful write William! loved the thought about tomorrow never comes...Hugs, Peg

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2008

Don't let the gray gloom get you down..
Great poetry William
Ron

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on March 8, 2008

soft and pensive--be well