Die I will, Without You (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Die I will, Without You
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Is this for Her? You are wondering No its for you, each one of you lovely poetess of the den some might think its for that bewitching entity of "Poetry"
Die I Will Without you ~*~ I was never aware That true love was so cruel So painful It hurts me So much being away From the loveliness of you Being so far apart Never knowing When will I see you Again. I die with just the thoughts Of not seeing you, I die if never I hear The innocent “accent“ Of divine heavenliness That escapes Your beautiful lips With every passionate Incoherent whispered I love you As love we make To stay alive Embraced You and I. Without you I am dying One day at a time A moment after another One hour goes Only minutes remain I am unable to breathe For within My empty embrace There’s a void Without you to fill it I will die. By: William Bonilla “D’Artagnan 05/09/09

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 18, 2009

THANK YOU WILLIAM...YOU ARE SUCH A GIFTED POET AND I REALLY DO APPRECIATE YOUR WORK. BLESSINGS AND THANKS FOR SHARING.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on May 27, 2009

Dear William , the sadnees and longing are so heartfelt and touching. Wish I could ease your pain. Its very hard to loose someone who was loved so much! I'll pray for you , for I firmly believe the power of prayer helps!...Blessings to you....M

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on May 18, 2009

Hello
Thought I had commented on this some time ago upon my first reading.

This is beautiful and sad all at once.
Hope you are doing well William.

Take care all the best.
SEMPER FI'

Gwendolyn

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on May 15, 2009

William, William,you are such a sweet talker!
Just let love breathe and all will be well...
Well done,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on May 14, 2009

So beautifully writing and expressed thought!
To love is to live and give
I truly agreed with your words
True Love hurts!!
Wishing you Peace Love and Light..and Hugsss...Yolie

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on May 11, 2009

William -
So poetically said and felt in the heart! of a dear one who "could" steal yours!
or the one reading these passionate loving expressions!
BEAUTIFUL POEM!

Warmest Blessings of Love, Light and Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
WRITE ON!

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on May 10, 2009

So passionate and so filled with longing. I have missed reading your work.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

What a beautiful gift...this is truly heart-warming!
Love and Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

How tender and expressive you are with these words, D'Artagnan. Our William is making good use of his absence from us, yet finds time to reveal his appreciation to other poets. Bravo, friend!
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

very nicely written

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Keep on Keepin On, D'Artagnan.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

We come back with a touch of romance, nothing less is expected from one of the Queen of France favorites.

Georg

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on May 9, 2009

A passionate write, William. I enjoy your ability to express romantic ideas so vividly. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello

As painful as it is, you like to have it and die a thousand deaths - just for the sight of her! What magical mystique does Love really have?
Your poem opens a lot of more of that magic...and we all love it...
can we have more, Master Love Magician?

Cynthia

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

William,
I love this passionate poem. Of course you are the king of passion here on the den.
Come back soon, kiss the wind with loving energy,
Your lonely collaborator,
Much peace, love, and light,

Amber V

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Hi William, Mom told me that love is cruel, but never went on to explain that oxymoronism (i think i just made a word up)of that! You express it so well here. Thank you for sharing this...

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Very romantic and passionate poem.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Love can indeed often be a most painful experience, William. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

WONDERFUL, VERY ROMANTIC AND VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

The women poets here will love you...
Hope you've been all right..
Ron