A Puzzling Moment (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on November 2, 2010

I still don't know what my purpose is
but that is ok as I am enjoying the journey

Love & Blessings
Vickie

Reviewed on October 26, 2010

...don't you just hate when that happens, oh my what was I going to say? lovely capture, William
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on October 24, 2010

VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Debashish Haar

Reviewed on October 22, 2010

Interesting thoughts, well poet-ized!

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on October 22, 2010

Yeah, these moments have increased in frequency as I've aged, so I know what they're like. It can be funny or frustrating. Thanks for sharing,
Sheila

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

I LOVED THIS ONE AND IT CAN HAVE MEANING ANY WAY YOU LOOK AT IT; COULD BE A 'SENIOR MOMENT' IN DAILY LIFE WHEN YOU FORGET WHAT YOU WENT TO THE CLOSET FOR, OR....COULD BE ONE FINDING THEMSELVES IN THE MIDST OF A SITUATION IN LIFE AND ONE WONDERS, 'HOW IN THE HECK DID I GET HERE'??!! BUT IN BOTH INSTANCES WE 'REGROUP', CALL ON JESUS AND CONTINUE ON WITH OUR PURPOSE...KNOWING 'HE' IS COMPLETELY IN CHARGE. GREAT WORK...DONE WELL AND ENJOYED. I THINK I'LL SAVE THIS ONE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE*HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

It's almost like a moment in 'The Lion, the Witch and The Wardrobe' that place, William, of altered reality, temporary confusion and then the dawning of new dimension and experience. You take a simple act and give it new meaning.
Yes!

John

Reviewed by pat medlin

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

delightful words for a common occurence

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

A tender poem ~
These moments of unexpectedly feeling lost and overwhelmed come to all, and this is such a profound poem because of the way you write of it.
Best Wishes,
Christine

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

i hate those moments..well captured!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

Life is full of puzzles, and it's wonderful when we figure them out!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

Ha ha you got me with this gem. Losing momentarily what you are looking for sometimes can be from a preoccupied mind or lack of concentration or just plain old age catching up with you. Great write, enjoyed.

George

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

It's happened to me a time or two (okay...maybe three or four) as well, William. Nice to read your work again.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 18, 2010

Believe it or not, I can relate, William; and I am sure many others will as well. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on October 18, 2010

William it is normal to forget things. You probably have much on your mind. Your like I am we respond in kind.

Namaste
Tony

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on October 18, 2010

I just hate when this happens,,,YOU have way too much going on in your mind..You need to relax, rejuvenate and return to calmness.

Good to read your work again, have missed you.

Peace, love and light,
Amber