Fodder for smiles and robust ambition
Debate of two hearts...some with conditions
Times are when spirits win a moondance
White knights in smiles take hold of chance
Passions are speaking...adrenalin rushes
Lips die for kisses...cheeks pink and blushing
Nerves in a quandary..."Touch me here first"
Pouted mouths lifted...dying of thirst
His words "I love you" tweak all my passions
I'm sinking much further than this dress has fashion
Knee deep and mired...shaking all over
I can't reveal this or he'll head for cover
What will he do with eye-to-eye screams
When I feed him strawberries with a little whipped cream
First look from him and my legs start to dance
Tighter they weave and he gives into chance
Woven so tight in this cocoon
All laced and loving under this moon
Lapis the sky...appendaged embrace
All hearts secure and winning this race
Passions seek more as pleasures succeed
Call in your dogs...this girl is tree'd.
My son has saved the amazing pic for screensaver! So I shall be equally felled and wobbly everytime I'm "hard at it!" This is a masterpiece, Susan, and touches ever spot imaginable in a delightful way - every twist and turn of this poem is bursting with surprise and arenalin: a real rush of the feel-good factor! I can really FEEL this: how is it that the chatter of the heart can be heard above all else at times and is quite unconcealable and all-consuming? And uncontrollable, too! This kind of connection with another is quite magical and all-too rare. You have conveyed a mystery in a magical and tangible way. TY Kate xx
Ahhhh...Susan....you are the Tops when it comes to uniquely
phrased romantic poetry! I like your other ones, too, but when
you combine a touch of humor with your excellent scribing...you
excel bigtime!
Deputy Dave Jenkins sets out to find the murderer of the local high school principal, aided by a voice from the grave that is sometimes helpful and sometimes misleading.
"Murder isn't usually this funny."
Amazon reviewer
The Wholly Book of Genesis is a humorous satire on the first book of the Old Testament where the Story of Creation, the building of Noah's Ark, Sodom and Gomorrah and the families of Abraham, Isaac and Jacob are thoroughly spoofed and broadsided.
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excellent write
William
Allen
you're not tree'd--you're on FIRE! whooo, passionate hot write!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
"...lips die for kisses..." WOW, wish i'd find a love like that :)...and wish i'd written it
Love Tinka
Great glow of passion burning out of control!
White knights in smiles take hold of chance
Would make a great kinda quote.
You sure won gold here..
Peter
Amy
phrased romantic poetry! I like your other ones, too, but when
you combine a touch of humor with your excellent scribing...you
excel bigtime!
Reindeer