Nature's Potion (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

A likely bunch of characters. The last one must be a raccoon, or worse, a bear. The last time I was zipped up like that, we both got too hot. I had to get out, but she had the zipper. ;-).

Ron

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2007

Giggle! This is a really good one, Susan. You ran away until you "tree'd" him. Good for you! This is a very neat piece of writing!

Ted

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on January 25, 2007

I love this Solid heartfelt piece! Susan! I really love it!
Your mind works wonders!
This is so poetically said and felt!
I wish tons of Happiness, sounds like when I met my love, on Match.com
and the feelings that I felt when he started writing and sharing, then by phone, 1 step at a time.
My hearts with ya'!

WArmest HuGs,Sheeeooxx

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

Well rooted and fertilised within.

Regards
Dai

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

This is delightful Susan. Your creativity is amazing. Well done!
~Butch

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

Being a Southern gal, did you use hounds to tree him?!

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

Susan, this is delightful! I've enjoyed this from start to finish. My heart is happy for you, sweet friend!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

Hug a tree, and imagine yourself inside it, roots upwards.
Unique poetry, and it flows like a cascading river..

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

Susan,

Great capture and pardon the pun. The rhyme and flow were perfect.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

Wonderful. whimsical,look at the hide and seek game of love Susan and yes he will be smiling when you hold him for sure.

Fee

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

There is a great flow and rhythm in this lovely poem written just for fun. Wish I can share your fun. Victor

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on January 23, 2007

I like this side of you Susan...well done and crafty.

Allen

Reviewed by Simon Barreiros (Reader)

Reviewed on January 23, 2007

Not sure if you meant it to be, but this ode's bright and funny and much fun to read. ..."she put out her hands and she made a magick sign...said all you need is ...Love Potion #9" I know , before your time that song.
Susan you never cease to amaze me...
Love you,
simon

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 23, 2007

delightfully creative, Susan ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 23, 2007

Sweet write. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 23, 2007

What chance has a guy got when a gal thinks he's the one. What a pic. Once my wife could put her arms around me now I'm just like that pic above you see.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on January 23, 2007

Amazine tree and wonderful write!!!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)