You see that freckle
-----------Well I feel you there
Tangled follicles
-----------> And you're over here
At the stop light
Driving to town
I sense your sparkle
I know your frown
Tasting blackberry
Raspberry jam
I rock in your passion
You're where I am
Quantum physics
Inner eye
I'm inside you
You're inside my....
MY Oh My
What a treat
You're within me
It's a detailed feast!
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Reviews of "Introduction to a Freckle"
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2007
Whoa! Sensuality to the max! What a feast Susan!
~Butch
Forget the roses, stop and smell the freckles - or should that be, 'smile the freckles'?
My freckles started a mass exodus way back when. They reached the red sea of adolescence where adulthood parted the waves, creating ridges along the forehead wherein thousands of freckles tumbled and disappeared. Some managed to escape up into the auburn forest. The freckles that remained in the valleys of cheek and jowel became nomads with no leader. My freckles are an autonomous collective that take it in turns to be executive for the week! He reports to me.
See what this write has done to my rationale today?
I was introduced to freckles by Doris Day. Been in love ever snce. Did you know that if you pick a freckle it will grow and eventually give you a beautiful, all over tan? What did Michael Jackson pick? ;-)
Ron
Reviewed by Sharon Lawson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2007
Long live freckles! "Freckles are a sign of beauty" - let's both relish that phrase ;o) I'm covered in them too and we've been through so much together just like your's have!!
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Michael
nice work.....Art Sun...
My freckles started a mass exodus way back when. They reached the red sea of adolescence where adulthood parted the waves, creating ridges along the forehead wherein thousands of freckles tumbled and disappeared. Some managed to escape up into the auburn forest. The freckles that remained in the valleys of cheek and jowel became nomads with no leader. My freckles are an autonomous collective that take it in turns to be executive for the week! He reports to me.
See what this write has done to my rationale today?
Regards
Freckle head face sit - down!
Ron
Love Tinka
Fee
Abdullahi
Amor
Love,
Eileen
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Reindeer
That's some freckle LOL A delightful romantic romp! Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.