I was off today and watched Camelot on my DVD. I began to wonder with my creative side and shoot holes in the mystique of yesterday's passion rituals. This is my side of the fairy tales of yore and the play that was offered during those humid afternoons.
It's all just for fun fellas.
Susan*
Once upon a Fairy Tale when maidens with long hair
Let it down for valor's fool who didn't really care
For what his friends would dare to think or even less to prove
As mindless notions quickly came as boldly he'd persue
The maiden with the moonlit eyes and stars made for this rube
With limpid glands that spoke in tights from every tuck and groove
She'd purr to him in moments while his fingers, scarred and bent
Grasped the edge of sanity while his passions proudly spent
Themselves upon the ivyed walls as per custom for the male
To leave a trail of silver prints... liken to the snail
Footprints of a love made quick and gushed upon the bricks
For mindless lust for fools who dared and maidens with their tricks
To woo the suitor's hand with wiles that caused so much dismay
With love that spent itself up high with lust just for a day
Gone as she mocked his play and turned his smile to tears
Back in the days of valor with laughter from these dear
Women of the Roundtable ... their Camelots of Haste
And playing men in those days when love was gone to waste
When men were fooled into this game...when passion laughed and felt
The playful tease of those that wore
a rusted chastity belt.
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Reviews of "Once Upon A Fairy Tale"
Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
ohh clever...the key to this poem is....
a master key......
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
Enjoyed this great write...especially like that ending!!
Lol. Reminded me of that fantasy spoof movie men in tight.It made me smile and chuckle. I love a good fantasy and this is certainly that. Well done.
I also got an idea for a poem off a piece of art I really love. Haven't gotten it down yet but I will.
Susan,
Excellent muse this is wonderful
"When men were fooled into this game...when passion laughed and felt
The playful tease of those that wore
a rusted chastity belt."
Deputy Dave Jenkins sets out to find the murderer of the local high school principal, aided by a voice from the grave that is sometimes helpful and sometimes misleading.
"Murder isn't usually this funny."
Amazon reviewer
The Wholly Book of Genesis is a humorous satire on the first book of the Old Testament where the Story of Creation, the building of Noah's Ark, Sodom and Gomorrah and the families of Abraham, Isaac and Jacob are thoroughly spoofed and broadsided.
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a master key......
EXCELLENT SUSAN
WILLIAM
Hugs,
The Voice
tony:)
I also got an idea for a poem off a piece of art I really love. Haven't gotten it down yet but I will.
Amor
love it
Excellent muse this is wonderful
"When men were fooled into this game...when passion laughed and felt
The playful tease of those that wore
a rusted chastity belt."
Love ~N~ peace.
I loved it~
Peggy
Leland
Hi Dave:
You can really write good poetry anywhere. I enjoyed this.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)