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Once Upon A Fairy Tale
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
  
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I was off today and watched Camelot on my DVD. I began to wonder with my creative side and shoot holes in the mystique of yesterday's passion rituals. This is my side of the fairy tales of yore and the play that was offered during those humid afternoons.

It's all just for fun fellas.
Susan*

Once upon a Fairy Tale when maidens with long hair
Let it down for valor's fool who didn't really care
For what his friends would dare to think or even less to prove
As mindless notions quickly came as boldly he'd persue
The maiden with the moonlit eyes and stars made for this rube
With limpid glands that spoke in tights from every tuck and groove
She'd purr to him in moments while his fingers, scarred and bent
Grasped the edge of sanity while his passions proudly spent
Themselves upon the ivyed walls as per custom for the male
To leave a trail of silver prints... liken to the snail
Footprints of a love made quick and gushed upon the bricks
For mindless lust for fools who dared and maidens with their tricks
To woo the suitor's hand with wiles that caused so much dismay
With love that spent itself up high with lust just for a day
Gone as she mocked his play and turned his smile to tears
Back in the days of valor with laughter from these dear
Women of the Roundtable ... their Camelots of Haste
And playing men in those days when love was gone to waste
When men were fooled into this game...when passion laughed and felt
The playful tease of those that wore
a rusted chastity belt.

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 Reviews of "Once Upon A Fairy Tale"
Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
ohh clever...the key to this poem is....
a master key......

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
Enjoyed this great write...especially like that ending!!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
Susan...very very intersting write...cheers...love n luck...miss u much...BHUWAN

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on June 10, 2003
A LOVELY FAIRYTALE INEED
EXCELLENT SUSAN

WILLIAM

Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2003
Thank you for the smiles. Great write.

Hugs,
The Voice

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2003
Hi Susan, I know of some who still where the belts! Great Write, I enjoyed it!


tony:)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 10, 2003
This is wonderful. I still love fairytales!!

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
What is a priest to say regarding chastity belts? :-)

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
Lol. Reminded me of that fantasy spoof movie men in tight.It made me smile and chuckle. I love a good fantasy and this is certainly that. Well done.
I also got an idea for a poem off a piece of art I really love. Haven't gotten it down yet but I will.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
This is wonderful. I love fairytales

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
Love these fairy tales...Splendid, Susan.
Amor

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
Susan Fantastic! You have such wit, every line is a treat to nibble on;-)

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
LOL
love it

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
Susan,
Excellent muse this is wonderful
"When men were fooled into this game...when passion laughed and felt
The playful tease of those that wore
a rusted chastity belt."

Love ~N~ peace.

I loved it~
Peggy

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
Good write, Susan. A different angle makes (Rapunzel, was it?) interesting again.
Leland

Reviewed on June 9, 2003
Very interesting write indeed! I have not seen the movie yet, but I think I would like to see that too.

Hi Dave:

You can really write good poetry anywhere. I enjoyed this.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)


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