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MessageInABottle
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Please don't try to find me,
I'm living beautifully.
Where I'm at,
I want to stay,
until my ending day.
There is much solitude,
no mean attitude.
The people are few,
life isn't askew.
It's a joy to live here,
no one suffers in fear.
No one lives real near.


This is an Island paradise,
I have little,
but I will suffice.
I do not need wealth,
don't worry about my health.
I'm glad I got lost,
it was worth the cost.


Anyone finding this message,
please don't try to find the passage.
This bottle could float out,
but you can not sail in,
so turn around my friend.
Never try to find me again.


Paradise.


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 Reviews of "MessageInABottle"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
hahaha...way to go.

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
Now did you skip out of Baltimore, or was this a mental message? Either way, it was a fantastic write. Enjoy paradise.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Bowers (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
Excellent Grady, sounds like a peaceful place, making it worthwhile getting lost. Also my favorite book.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
Grady...sounds like a bit of heaven....
I wouldn't want intruders either...
Just the sun, the sky, the earth, God
and you....lovely write..floria

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
Excellent Grady, also my favorite movie.............

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
pure excellence Grady!!

love Tinka

Reviewed on March 22, 2004
wonderful write, grady! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
Message to the wind and surf. Very nicely done. Actually it's a little better than "nicely done." The poem had a whole lotta substance which spoke volumes to me. Great stuff!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
Your work is always a pleasure to read. Always!


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