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Devil Bet
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Feel a little like crap, probably need a nap. I swear if a devil shows up I might just zap. Pardon my attitude, but I need the Garden.

What the hell Adam and Eve fell The devil bets we'll fold but God gave us a coffee cup to hold along with other good things picked or sold This is the same old first man and woman story told Sometimes I wonder why God picked on first man First man was spoiled his azz hadn't even hardly toiled He knew nothing of a mean azz world Everyday in this place the devil tries to knock the smile off our face God should have waited until he got around to me and my wife I'd have chopped the snakes head off with my knife I know about the misery and strife My wife would have sent the snake on his way all you humans would have been having a blessed day opg

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Reviews of "Devil Bet"

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on September 4, 2009

He sure was picking on Adam. Didn't even give him a belly button. Now why was that? Great poetic expression, Grady.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on September 4, 2009

"Sometimes I wonder why
God picked on first man"

Grady, surly you've heard that when God made Adam, He was practicing..
when God made Eve, He was perfecting :o)
(just HAD to get that in...LOL)
Blessings and Love - Mcike

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on September 3, 2009

I fear I would have wanted to hold the snake, believe it or not I think they are very beautiful. Love your philisophical poetry Grady.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on September 2, 2009

yeah-you need a nap-took one myself this afternoon-even though i had more than enough to do

Reviewed by Lew Duffey

Reviewed on September 2, 2009

Duh! What's an Azz? All kidding aside I truly know the feeling. I like the way you expressed it.
God bless,
Lew

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